Ruts

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Refined by much traffic Robust those ruts become Resilient to data's Rapid influx, just rest.. Remarkably channels Refined, ready for change Ruts~ deep within my brain

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/4/2023 7:49:00 AM

- Yes, deep inside the brain ... a lot of information ... great written, Sara :) - hugs

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/4/2023 12:55:00 PM

A lifetime of information and we have not even touched the surface. Makes a person feel small or inadequate. Anne-Lise, your visit add a special note to my page. Sara

Hiya Sharma

Date: 9/4/2023 4:53:00 AM

Oh another wonderful pleiades this is, dear Sara.. I'm absolutely loving your meticulously crafted words here, articulated with a very intriguing touch! Brilliant work, as always! Sending love- Hiya :)

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/4/2023 7:07:00 AM

Why, thank you, Hiya. I appreciate the praise received. Sara

Jack Horne

Date: 9/4/2023 4:18:00 AM

very thoughtful write here, my friend

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/4/2023 7:06:00 AM

Thank you, Jack. Your comments are uplifting. Sara