Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Free verse

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- Ruthless -

The merciless judgment
                                  where the fruit fell
                                  subject to decay
                                                 ~
                                  Trembling in the fight
                                  from root to crown
                                  hurtful and bitter
                                                 ~
                                  Fateful
                                  in strong storm
                                  causing chaos
                                                 ~
                                  With a sticky hand
                                  at the end of the dance
                                  blowing south



                                              28/09/2021
                                      Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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Michael Tor February 3, 2022 at 5:02 PM How did I miss this one? Wonderfully written...

Phyllis Babcock October 15, 2021 at 11:40 AM A nice creative write on the fall season. Sun is out today after a brief snowfall yesterday. Nicely written. love phyl

Mystic Rose Rose October 4, 2021 at 2:41 PM May we keep a little color from the Autumn before it burns into winter, nicely done Sunshine :)

Paula Goldsmith October 2, 2021 at 12:33 PM What a creative write. Pretty fall leaves. I love the fall time of the year. Wish it would last longer. Have a great/blessed day................................

Panagiota Romios September 30, 2021 at 1:11 PM Hi Anne Lise...I was taking a break...Fun...,stuck on a level of CC,ugh? A creative write,.... Pangie

Anitha Jayasankar September 30, 2021 at 9:50 AM Inspired from a scene of nature and wise words so thought provoking dear Anne... Enjoyed reading... Hugs... ~ Ani

Delice Arleen Skelly September 30, 2021 at 8:22 AM The decay of autumn ushers in a crystal clear winter(Hopefully) very nice indeed Anne-Lise...Delice

Victor Buhagiar September 29, 2021 at 2:08 AM A beautiful picture and poem. Life alas destines us to death, but out of that life will be resurrected. Hugs.

Arthur Vaso September 28, 2021 at 10:20 PM I love your poetry, but Anne-Lise this is a real gem!!!!

Alexis Y. September 28, 2021 at 1:37 PM WoW! Anne-Lise, This is so well written. I echo what Judy said. Well done. Have a wonderful day:-)Alexis

Judy Ball September 28, 2021 at 1:06 PM WoW! Beautifully and well described this is quite the view of Autumn. Well done., God Bless, JB

Tom Cunningham September 28, 2021 at 12:09 PM Quite a deep and thought provoking verse Anne, I hope you are keeping well. Tom

Darlene De Beaulieu September 28, 2021 at 12:06 PM Hello Sunshine Smile a beautiful poem about autumn. Hugs.

Silent One September 28, 2021 at 10:45 AM Interesting use of metaphor here... Nice to still see you around my friend