Ruth

There was a great famine in Bethlehemjudah that was so grand
Traveling to Moab with Mahlon and Chilion their two older boys
The arduous journey they have undertaken won't produce many joys
As Elimelich and Naomi left their own home in search of a better land

For soon there after Elimelich would fall very ill as death was fast
And though the boys married Orpah and Ruth that too did not stand
To lose your two sons after already having lost your loving husband
Poor old Naomi was finding it hard as though she could no longer last

She told her two daughter in laws to just go and to let her also die
To go and be happy for to stay there was no good reason to admit
They both insisted and cried that they just would not even hear of it
But I guess after several more times Orpah did kind of just say goodbye

But Ruth had a different character as she stated her case so strong
Even Naomi in now seeing her seriousness and love had to concede
Oh but that faithfulness of Ruth in Chapter 2 and where it would lead
As all that loyalty that was within flowed from her mouth like a song
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Kendrick Avatar
March 25, 2014 at 10:37 AM
Congrats on your winning work..Way to go in the contest..Sara
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March 23, 2014 at 12:57 AM
Hi Vincent, a nice story.... Congratulations! Linda
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March 22, 2014 at 3:57 PM
Hi Vincent, This is a nice entry in "Isaiah Z's RUTH contest." congratulations on your win. LOVE ~SKAT~
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March 21, 2014 at 11:08 AM
A wonderful story Vincent, I extremely enjoyed it. Congrats on your win my Friend.......Roger
Johnson Avatar
March 21, 2014 at 10:40 AM
Congratulations on your 3rd place win, Vincent. Love, Joyce
Gasun Avatar
March 21, 2014 at 5:58 AM
My hearty congratulations on your great write and win my dear friend Vincent. TYSM for sharing! love lots & hugs, Leonora
Mehta Avatar
March 21, 2014 at 5:16 AM
Nice presentation on the honesty and devotion on Ruth.. Congrats on a fine win, vincent
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March 21, 2014 at 1:51 AM
Well done Vincent... Congratulations on the win... Verlena
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March 20, 2014 at 10:33 PM
Congratulations on third place, Vincent! This is almost like a synopsis of the book. I was pleased to note the shift from sorrow to joy in the last stanza, concluded with a fantastic ending line.
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February 26, 2014 at 8:34 AM
Enjoyed this, Vincent. Haven't done one of "Ruth" and I don't know why. You encourage me to give it a try. I like the way you stick to the biblical account.
Dietrich Avatar
February 22, 2014 at 5:18 PM
yep, you DID it. I knew you could. I was wanting to write myself about the second part of the story, but what a lot of work it would be, and this contest only gives you maybe 16 lines tops!! I've been here all afternoon. Time to call it a day! (and get to writing like you did!!)
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