Rusty Bucket

I lower a bucket, rusted through, slowly into
the absolute absence of rational arousal
that is my mind's abyss

my heart claims, capriciously, that 
it is a well

the rope is frayed and laughably short
every dream has long ago 
poured out the rotted bottom

the metal clangs like a dull bell
bouncing off the hopeless despair 
of your betrayal

my soul thinks of the Blue Danube Waltz
and dances four beats to the measure
will you not join me?

I think of a joke and begin to laugh
I begin to count sevens
and contemplate shards of mirror
and a fools myriad reflections

and you all just stare at me
expressionless
and think me
too pitiful
for a metaphor
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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December 30, 2013 at 1:56 PM
Michael, Hope you are enjoying the holidays, Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers, This is deep!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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December 27, 2013 at 4:51 PM
- Welcome to P-Soup, Michael ! - I like to read your first poem here.- A very good poem ! :)) - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck! - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours). - My first greeting to you from Norway. - I will come back to read more .... another day :) - All the best for the year 2014 ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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December 27, 2013 at 5:01 PM
What a nice welcome. I am so pleased you liked my little poem. I will try to spend some time here when I am able. Looking forward to reading some work here. Nice to meet you. mikey
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December 27, 2013 at 4:46 PM
This is very good Michael, What a wonderfully deep path you have laid down with this work, each line is epic... Love the title..., I like your first poetic piece on the site ,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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December 27, 2013 at 5:04 PM
Hi Linda. What a lovely message. Pleased that you like my little piece. It looks a little fancier in "word". It is indented and laid out a bit differently. But, these are the words anyway. I will try to find some time to check things out. Nice to meet you. Drama and Love sound like fun! mikey
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