Rusting In Seattle

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*Image of Out in the Rain by Gifer Rusting In Seattle Prompt rain starts~~I without an umbrella makes me feel dumb & dumber 2020 August 24 *1st Place* STRAND COMPLETELY NEW (27) ,any form,any theme ~~Brian Strand: Judged 2020 August 27

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/28/2020 9:30:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. Few words with much said. Rain, what is that????? We have had rain four times all year. Dry and hot. Enjoy your win, day and stay dry.............

Hilo Poet
Date: 8/28/2020 9:34:00 AM

Thanks, Paula, and omgoodness, really, wow, stay safe and well my friend, Aloha! William

D.W. Rodgers

Date: 8/28/2020 5:58:00 AM

Smiling - must be a NW coast thing. I was reminded of Amanda in Tom Robins' "Another Roadside Attraction" who walked through the rain as if it wasn't there. Congrats on your win.

Hilo Poet
Date: 8/28/2020 8:44:00 AM

Thanks, D.W., for that great share and for your accolade, stay well and safe my friend, Aloha! William

Sam Kauffman

Date: 8/27/2020 12:28:00 PM

As a northwestener, been there many times William - a head slapping experience of "I know better!" Congratulations on your first place win!

Hilo Poet
Date: 8/27/2020 3:51:00 PM

Former 1980 Bainbridge/Poulsbo here, ferry rider with a cousin who lived in Gig, so when Seattle rains, we get the downpour...I sure don't miss our umbrella stand by our door, lol and thanks, Sam, always stay well and safe my friend, Aloha! William

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/24/2020 7:07:00 AM

Drenched? I’m looking from the window. Raining in Minnesota too.

Hilo Poet
Date: 8/24/2020 9:19:00 AM

Muggy humid rain here, ugh, stay dry and well, Kim, Aloha! William