William Kelii Kekaula Poet Monoku

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Rusting In Seattle

*Image of Out in the Rain by Gifer

Rusting In Seattle

Prompt rain starts~~I without an umbrella makes me feel dumb & dumber

2020 August 24
*1st Place*
STRAND COMPLETELY NEW (27) ,any form,any theme
~~Brian Strand: Judged 2020 August 27

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Paula Goldsmith August 28, 2020 at 9:30 AM Congratulations on your win. Few words with much said. Rain, what is that????? We have had rain four times all year. Dry and hot. Enjoy your win, day and stay dry............. William Kelii Kekaula August 28, 2020 at 9:34 AM Thanks, Paula, and omgoodness, really, wow, stay safe and well my friend, Aloha! William

D.W. Rodgers August 28, 2020 at 5:58 AM Smiling - must be a NW coast thing. I was reminded of Amanda in Tom Robins' "Another Roadside Attraction" who walked through the rain as if it wasn't there. Congrats on your win. William Kelii Kekaula August 28, 2020 at 8:44 AM Thanks, D.W., for that great share and for your accolade, stay well and safe my friend, Aloha! William

Sam Kauffman August 27, 2020 at 12:28 PM As a northwestener, been there many times William - a head slapping experience of "I know better!" Congratulations on your first place win! William Kelii Kekaula August 27, 2020 at 3:51 PM Former 1980 Bainbridge/Poulsbo here, ferry rider with a cousin who lived in Gig, so when Seattle rains, we get the downpour...I sure don't miss our umbrella stand by our door, lol and thanks, Sam, always stay well and safe my friend, Aloha! William

Kim Rodrigues August 24, 2020 at 7:07 AM Drenched? I’m looking from the window. Raining in Minnesota too. William Kelii Kekaula August 24, 2020 at 9:19 AM Muggy humid rain here, ugh, stay dry and well, Kim, Aloha! William