Rust and Gold

My poetry is rust.
Rhyme like a crime.
Like metal, you will weaken 
When you read this poetry.

Fortunately, rust cannot touch you.
For among women and men
And perhaps even among creation,
You are surely gold and golden.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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February 13, 2020 at 10:32 PM
See you are back in the game. great piece to come back with. Hope all is well with you. Regards David in NZ
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February 14, 2020 at 12:12 AM
Thanks David. Hope all is well with you too.
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