Edward Ibeh Poet Verse

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"Yalto" is a form invented by yours truly Lines: 1-15. 3,4,2,4,5,3,2,3,2,3,3,5,6,1,5 syllables Date written: 03/02/2026

Rust And Bone

"don't get old!,"
     some old-timer 
          once joked,
               but was it, though?
                    he gave examples...

silver hair,
     bad knees 
          cloudy eyes 
                bones crack,
                     mind hunting...

for a name 
     says he's "rust and bone"
          youth, a ghost in mirrors
               damn,
                    he's got me worried!

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Tom Cunningham March 4, 2026 at 1:13 AM Frightening thought Edward, sadly old age will get us all. Tom Edward Ibeh March 5, 2026 at 4:33 AM If we're lucky enough to get there at least;-) Thanks for dropping by, Tom.

Lin Lane March 3, 2026 at 3:00 AM I like your Yalto form, Edward. I usually find that I have too much to say to use it but I’d be up to the challenge with the right topic. Rust and Bone was a great title. Lin Lane March 3, 2026 at 4:45 AM Spending this week with my daughter in Florida but I will when I get back. Edward Ibeh March 3, 2026 at 4:23 AM It's best used for pithy musings/observations. When you write one, do let me know, Lin. I'd love to check it out!