Rush Hour
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Name Of Contest ; Into The Hexaline Groove
Date Posted ; 9 th May 2025
Name Of Sponsor ; Nette Onclaud
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NB In my view the end of poem is ironic.
The high speed walker/sprinter at the start loses their traction
and become as slow as rush hour cars
Mine is a wild spring step,
shoe heels dash leaf strewn path,
I spy wrinkled driver’s,
rueful rush hour grim mien,
from sleek chrome cars crawl as,
my drained feet moult traction!
Copyright © Howard Kerr | Year Posted 2025
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