Rush Hour

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Contest: Into the hexaline groove,sponsored by Nette Onclaud. 5/9/25

Going to the town store, during rush hour, a chore. I ran to the door, fell. Keys now lost on the floor, but no keys could be found. Oh, they're in my pocket!

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Speaks Volumes

Date: 5/10/2025 3:22:00 AM

A good switch of pace, well done.

Tania Kitchin
Date: 5/10/2025 3:49:00 AM

Thank you.

Howard Kerr

Date: 5/10/2025 1:04:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Tania with this no nonsense nuanced work. Wry humour and of course immaculate end plot Howard

Tania Kitchin
Date: 5/10/2025 3:49:00 AM

Howard, thank you.

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 5/9/2025 7:32:00 AM

Dear Tania, your little mishap is such a perfect snapshot of life’s everyday chaos-rushing, stumbling, and that moment of relief when the lost is found right where it always was. It’s a sweet reminder that sometimes, the answers are closer than we think. Spring Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel

Tania Kitchin
Date: 5/9/2025 12:14:00 PM

Daniel, thank you.