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Rush Hour

rush hour bus stop strangers waiting a sparrow paces posted on May 25, 2018

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Date: 5/29/2018 2:22:00 PM
I like the contrast between the rush of traffic/people and the nonchalance of the sparrow, Line! ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 5/29/2018 4:06:00 PM
Thanks a lot, Paul, for your much appreciated visit and comment.
Date: 5/29/2018 1:43:00 PM
I too would have noticed the sparrow above the people.
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Date: 5/29/2018 4:06:00 PM
Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Caren.

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