Running Water

The place where they stay is just a shack
Their clothes made from a burlap sack
Running water's here
But just to be clear
They run to the well and bring it back!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Hoffman Avatar
June 12, 2018 at 7:12 PM
No wonder they had no problems of obesity back in the old days lol; a cute clever one Pat!~Che :)
Adams Avatar
June 13, 2018 at 8:29 PM
Thanks, and that's a good point!!!
Pigeon Tart Avatar
June 12, 2018 at 7:48 AM
Cute :) xomo!
Adams Avatar
June 13, 2018 at 8:29 PM
Glad you like it!!
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