Runner

the road runner raced within the lucid dream
looking for something to satisfy its heart
goalposts shifted in the desire stream
shapeshifting fears did not depart

as time flowed on body aged
the exhausted soul chose to be still
recognising it had been by ego upstaged
invoking grace it surrendered to God its will

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Date: 5/5/2025 4:47:00 AM
Heartiest congratulations on your win in my contest with this wonderful rhyme poem, Seeker. I wish it were longer, nonetheless, it was a delight to read!
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Date: 5/5/2025 10:28:00 AM
Ah, it was a last minute rush entry with only one slot left in the contest. Happy you liked it even though, as you say it is a short poem.
Date: 5/3/2025 4:28:00 AM
Hello S, this a very powerful piece beautifully written. Surrendering to God is the ultimate goal. Wishing you a wonderful weekend my poet friend.
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Date: 5/3/2025 8:20:00 AM
Thank you, Zyrool, God bless
Date: 5/3/2025 1:56:00 AM
I really love the shape of your poem dear seeker, and as time goes by, we realize the importance of remaining still and in silence we find the light within, your way with words is as always so soulfully sincere, and i especially loved “ goalposts shifted in the desire stream shapeshifting fears did not depart” exquisite how youv phrased your thoughts and sublime rhymes! Pleasure reading warm words woven in such eloquence! Sending you light always
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Date: 5/3/2025 3:41:00 AM
Thank you, IE dear :)
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