Breezy, break away free bird, as free as easy as the wind wanderess go onward ~ through life~ with an incessant need to find solace and meaning back in god’s grace It’s penetrating places you roam and journeyed from Free bird without a home, without your flock Once wings spread across golden honey horizons then held still on a dock Cries o’er the retched waves drenched in its chunder into the d e e p pulled u n d e r yet, naïve waif, like a seagull in the skyline so free, inside is a breezy pathfinder Blowing are the winds o’er the sea facile and carefree Jagged are rugged roads that block, all paths ahead obscure bone trails lead downward Mountain lions abound stalk, smell the desperation on sweat dripper of hurt, rebellious When ships pass in at night, they speak in the darkness, disappear in the vastness Free bird fly far—far away, never to return again A tempest moves the wind wildly through the trees s~h~a~k~ing sands Put your hands together Wanderess, be still, runner contend a prayer come into sense come home ~
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