Runaway Train

Runaway train, coming down the track
A life of pain, carried on my back
Speeding by, towns with no names
You can’t cry, on the runaway train.

Sometimes life, takes you for a ride
Only nineteen and I’ve got a bride
Hop on board, stay by my side
“I want off”, is what she cried.

Runaway train, coming down the track
A life of pain, carried on my back
Speeding by, towns with no names
You can’t cry, on the runaway train.

Looking for a job, one can’t be found
Steal a loaf of bread, run outta town
Just trying to get by, the best I can
There’s no going, back home again.

Runaway train, coming down the track
A life of pain, carried on my back
Speeding by, towns with no names
You can’t cry, on the runaway train.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Dietrich Avatar
May 20, 2010 at 4:25 PM
very intereseting the repeating lines in this one. SEemed like a form poem. Congrats. I enjoyed it!
Brown Avatar
May 19, 2010 at 12:57 PM
Congratulations on your win in Irma's "Runaway Train"contest Joe. Good Luck in her next contest. Love, Carol
White Avatar
May 19, 2010 at 6:05 AM
Cool write Joe- well deserved win here- Congrats to you
Fraser Avatar
May 19, 2010 at 3:37 AM
Joe, pretty impressive piece if i may say so. It ran like a short movie in my mind. Many congratulations on your win in Irma's fine contest >> James
Sweetheart Avatar
May 18, 2010 at 7:47 PM
Congrats Joe on your winning poem in the Runaway Train contest... awesome and creative write and a special trip to the winners circle for a victory lap...enjoy..luv.. from the "Sweetheart"
Johnson Avatar
May 18, 2010 at 1:08 PM
And I am betting on you with this one. Loove, Joyce
Brown Avatar
May 18, 2010 at 3:35 AM
It was a pleasure to read your poetry this morning Joe. I hope you have a wonderful day filled with inspiration. Love,Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
May 17, 2010 at 9:16 PM
Really terrific entry Joe and nice rhyme too ..good luck in the contest... guess u know the title to my entry ..haha.. enjoyed this deep read from u.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"
Culverhouse Avatar
May 17, 2010 at 6:20 PM
sure you can, just don't let nobody see.
Cwiak Avatar
May 17, 2010 at 3:41 PM
Could be the verse for a song if the music were added...nicely done. Good luck in the contest. Dan C
Echo Avatar
May 17, 2010 at 12:26 PM
A very nicely written poem :) -Echo
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May 17, 2010 at 9:31 AM
Joe, this has a rhythm to it, sound good and familiar. Good luck in the contest,..p..d
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