Runaway Child

Far away from home
Nowhere to go
Nowhere to be accepted
No sense of belonging

Sinful man maybe he is
A disgrace to his family
Deprived from his home
Shameful of what he is

People shook their head as they judge him
Murmuring and whispering words against him
Yes he might have done what they are saying but not all
But even so he needs to keep running away

Walking in the street with the scorching heat above and dirty road below
Hunger and survivability have cause him another mistake
He said to himself, “They must be right there is no hope for me to change.”

Remorse and regret are all he feels
For he thinks his family’s misery are all because of him
He wants to go home but is he worthy to do so?

Brace yourself runaway child and stand up from where you have fallen
Close your ears from whispers of hopeless word
Listen to your heart and let your will overpower the darkness that covers you
See and know that there are still people who are waiting for you to come back
Run and follow the light until you find your way back home
Where you will be loved unconditionally no matter what 
For you have been forgiven and accepted since before you runaway.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 3/23/2016 12:00:00 PM
deep write Doris, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 10/22/2014 6:30:00 PM
Yes, we can always go back home. No matter what we've done, our family will still love us and accept us.... I enjoyed this inspiring and motivational write. Nice work, Doris! Congrats on your win!
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Doris Jamoner
Date: 10/28/2014 11:54:00 AM
Thank you for the commen kelly ^^
Date: 10/19/2014 10:30:00 AM
A tale as old as time. Sadly many keep running and choose to pay their own price for their sin. Unfortunately they are attempting to write the check from a bankrupt account.
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Doris Jamoner
Date: 10/21/2014 2:57:00 PM
So true.. I love the way you explained it. Thanks!
Date: 10/18/2014 11:11:00 AM
Cool poem Doris. It gives hope to those out there who may be hopeless. Yes... life is tough, and I thank God every day for every blessing.. BiG and small. Xx~Xx
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Doris Jamoner
Date: 10/21/2014 3:05:00 PM
I also thank God for all the blessings and giving strength to pass all the problem.
Date: 10/18/2014 6:17:00 AM
A beautiful piece...I love that last line....hugs Tim
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Doris Jamoner
Date: 10/21/2014 3:24:00 PM
Thank you tim
Date: 10/18/2014 2:56:00 AM
A very moving piece you have written Doris. Congratulations to your well, deserved placement. Regards, Teddy.
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Doris Jamoner
Date: 10/21/2014 3:27:00 PM
Thank you ^^
Date: 10/17/2014 1:08:00 PM
Hi Doris, Very intense story/poem. I enjoyed it immeasurably. I will make a point of reading your material. Great job. Keep up the good work. Congratulations on your great win. Take care. Earl
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Doris Jamoner
Date: 10/21/2014 3:40:00 PM
Thank you Earl ^^
Date: 10/17/2014 9:53:00 AM
love how you penned this doris powerful piece bless you
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Date: 10/16/2014 10:06:00 PM
Beautiful message in a beautiful poem. Congratulations on your win Doris.
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Doris Jamoner
Date: 10/21/2014 2:59:00 PM
Thanks Brenda ^^
Date: 10/16/2014 8:34:00 AM
It is nice to see this super one on the winning list,congrats Doris.
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Doris Jamoner
Date: 10/16/2014 11:15:00 AM
Thank you ^^
Date: 10/16/2014 5:31:00 AM
Captivating write, congrats on the fine win, Doris
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Doris Jamoner
Date: 10/16/2014 11:16:00 AM
Thank you
Date: 10/15/2014 11:35:00 PM
No bad writers in this contest! You were fast, furious, humorous, romantic,lost, found, sought after, wondrous! THANKS FOR ENTERING! I'M HAPPY!
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Doris Jamoner
Date: 10/16/2014 11:16:00 AM
Thank you ^^
Date: 8/30/2014 10:07:00 AM
Namaste May God, bless you Doris, for your thoughts on this poem, I enjoy reading the truth. Great piece!!...:) Also, read my poem, "Seventeen," and "Street Life." Stay strong, Ken
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Doris Jamoner
Date: 10/16/2014 11:16:00 AM
Thank u! Sure I will read those ^^
Date: 8/29/2014 10:43:00 AM
An outstanding write indeed...You named the problem and provided a solution...love the way you presented this piece. Excellent Doris!
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Doris Jamoner
Date: 8/29/2014 3:53:00 PM
Thanks for reading and sweet comment,. I really appreciate it.
Date: 8/26/2014 5:56:00 PM
have you ever read the story about The Prodigal Son?
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Doris Jamoner
Date: 8/28/2014 9:46:00 AM
Yes and I wish he will also return home just what the prodigal son did.
Date: 8/26/2014 7:06:00 AM
There is no disguising your sincerity, Doris. Writing for the heart, regardless of form, is true poetry--I wish he could read this !
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Doris Jamoner
Date: 8/28/2014 9:43:00 AM
Thank you for your kind words Jerry : )
Date: 8/23/2014 11:17:00 PM
Beautifully written Doris. Love the encouragement you provided. Maybe a child denied will find this as acceptance. Very beautiful Doris! Verlena
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Doris Jamoner
Date: 8/25/2014 12:54:00 PM
I hope so Verlana.. Thanks for dropping by.
Date: 8/22/2014 1:51:00 PM
Awesome write Doris, and the advice you gave at the end was beautiful and inspiring and should be conveyed to all runaways. Have a great weekend!
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Doris Jamoner
Date: 8/25/2014 12:52:00 PM
Thank you for taking time to read and comment Vincent. I really appreciate it.
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