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*what three days back at college will do to you.

run to fun

My daddy—he once told me
don’t ever play with nuns
they’ll hit you with their rulers
it won’t be any fun

I snuck out of that prison
and now I’m on the run

Once freed from that schoolhouse
I sunbathed in the sun
I stayed out late, I went on dates
looking out for number-one

When I think of what I went through
of all the tired repressive lies
I keep running wise, in slick disguise
my purpose is renewed

Don’t ever let ‘em tell you
you can’t have any fun
If they preach that hackneyed drivel
grab some things and run
.
.
Songs for this:
Cold Heart (PNAU Remix) by Elton John & Dua Lipa
I'm Still Standing by Elton John

Webster: hackneyed = uninteresting, unfun, dull and unoriginal.

*stolen almost directly, in spirit anyway, from that freewheeling rebel, Johnny Cash

**My first 8 years of school were parochial

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Date: 1/19/2025 1:52:00 PM
I was taught by the nuns through 8th grade as well and then by the Jesuits through high school. Like Kim, I have stories to tell... In high school a couple of the priests taught a group of us to play Bourré (booray); we would always play during lunch and they would end up winning all our money.
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Anais Vionet
Date: 1/19/2025 7:05:00 PM
THAT'S funny (win all your money) - I suppose you didn't KNOW that God was on their side?
Date: 1/17/2025 5:56:00 PM
My first 7, but it wasn’t that bad, however I do have a couple stories.
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Anais Vionet
Date: 1/19/2025 7:07:00 PM
Ha! Yeah, we all have "a couple of stories," luckily, I was a bystander in mine.
Date: 1/16/2025 9:55:00 AM
My first 8 were parochial too. Never had any problem with the nuns though. I was the junior high all star basketball player so they liked me. Never saw much in the way of Christian conduct either. Guys were smoking dope on the playground and some of the pop girls were taking soapers before class. Ahhh, gotta love the 70's, eh?
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Anais Vionet
Date: 1/16/2025 10:09:00 AM
I never had any problem with the nuns either. I was a super rules follower—unimaginative me—it never occurred to me to do otherwise. Of course, we were in China the last two years—there wasn't much to get up to. I was surrounded, every minute, by either my au pair ("Huàn gong" in Chinese) or Charles. *shrug*
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