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Run

Run Just gonna run run run run without looking back Just wanna be far far from fractions and abstraction Just wanna breath in a way that only yes only a bit of it make a hurricane Just wanna feel the joy in the strength of standing up once again Just wanna come back to my own world

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Jesse Zerlaut

Date: 3/28/2017 10:31:00 AM

What a treasure. I felt it as much as read it. I even felt a bit vulnerable to it and my own desires to be in my own world where I'm safe. complete ten.. but since I can't give you that... 7!

Elaheh Abdi Langaan
Date: 4/1/2017 3:27:00 PM

It's really nice to meat you and I'm really happy you liked that. Being in the real life is something that we can't get ride of it but sometimes it's helpful to belong to somewhere which is safe and secure. It is nowhere but our own world.

Pashang Salehi

Date: 8/26/2016 4:20:00 PM

Elaheh Khanoom aziz, not only you can go back to your own world, you can visit mine... Forget about hurricanes, think of a breeze......very nice

Elaheh Abdi Langaan
Date: 4/1/2017 3:29:00 PM

being talented is something, having motivation for writing is something else. I'm not motivated to write since dad left me.

Pashang Salehi
Date: 8/29/2016 4:59:00 PM

You're very talented.. keep writing...

Elaheh Abdi Langaan
Date: 8/27/2016 5:29:00 AM

chashm sir i just took a glance on your works, sounds great :), the power which hurricane creates can't be compared with a breeze but chashm again, i try to be a bit milder best

Probir Gupta

Date: 8/19/2016 4:59:00 AM

Great ... and nice ...

Elaheh Abdi Langaan
Date: 8/19/2016 5:05:00 AM

hello that's really kind of you. thank you