Run-A-Way Love Train

i was walking down the tracks one night, it was dark -no moon above. i was just trying to
make it home, wasn't thinking of falling in love.

i looked into the distance, i saw a bridge so long and narrow. i thought about not going
there-a different way to sparrow.

my feet kept moving forward, down the tracks that led me home. my ears did not hear it
yet, that distant rumble and moan.

as i entered there onto the bridge too far for me to turn, i felt the ground beneath me
quake, my stomach starts to burn.

i then could hear the whistle, screaming into the night. my mind was filled with painful
thoughts,my heart was filled with fright.

i knew that it was coming, barreling down the tracks. i knew that  i had gone too far to
try to make it back

my feet picked up the pace, but running? do i dare? i can't see where i'm going and i know
no body there.

faster and faster my feet went to try to beat this train. no where to jump, no where to
hide, i'm so afraid of the pain.

i turned to look behind me, the light i  now could see, i ran faster and faster, with 
 this thing coming after me

as i lie there  between the tracks, on that bridge- on the ground, i opened my eyes to see
your  face and your deep set eyes of brown.

and all at once it hit me this train is live so true. i went and fell in love my dear, so
now what do i do?

i'm not sure what will happen next, but this one thing i know. if you are ever really
mine, I'll ever let you go.

i would treat you like the man you are and give you all my heart. i'd make you proud and
happy, never wanting  us to part.

I'll leave you with this one last thought...how wonderful could be, a long and lasting
union, just between you and me...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011


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Date: 8/3/2011 2:36:00 PM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one in the PoetrySoup International Poetry contest Kelly. I wish you the best in the final round. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/31/2011 7:59:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved feature this week Kelly. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/30/2011 6:16:00 PM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, kelly
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Date: 4/11/2011 6:09:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Kelly in John Moses Freeman's contest "Praises of Life Precept". Love, Carol
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Date: 4/9/2011 4:19:00 PM
Congrats Kelly on your HM in John's contest with this lovely creation luv.. enjoy your very special honor for awesome words ...
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Date: 4/9/2011 12:11:00 PM
Kelly. Congratulation On your worthy poems success in Hm. . Agape, Moses
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Date: 4/9/2011 11:22:00 AM
Really enjoyed your narrative approach, Kelly. We find love when we least expect it. If you have found this type of love, I hope it lasts forever. Congratulations on your success in John Freemans's contest! Best wishes, Carolyn
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Date: 4/9/2011 10:31:00 AM
Congratulations on the HM win in the contest, kelly
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Date: 4/5/2011 1:09:00 PM
Hi Kelly: WOW!! GREAT poem. What a fantastic way to enter Poetry Soup. I look forward to reading more of your works. Peace.
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Date: 4/5/2011 9:54:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Kelly. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Love, Carol 1 Comments
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Date: 4/5/2011 8:51:00 AM
Smile, *^_^* The love train, jetting down the tracks; grab your suit case and, don't look back; "All Aboard &, 'Tickets Please.'" = So, was it a dream? Did your beauty actually get hit by that train or was it, beautiful love which rolled your lovely, way?? And yes, long lasting as within ever and forevers, beyond a day. == "Sweet Poe &, I Love 'The Enchanting Aura of, Midnight Trains.'" === love, jasper
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