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Ruminate On This

She has a proclivity in being jaunty
As she looks down the asphalt way
With stunted growth of apple orchards
That blossom in the spring
They begin; they begin

A carefree end 
To what was swollen, bloated, and rotten
And wickedness emitting the fragrance
Of decaying smells of worthlessness
Across the waters, floating and wet

She catches the why and emulates the peacefulness
On cargo ships at heaven’s gate
And longing for the weight to be lifted,
And longing for the weight to be lifted.

This heavy clumsy mess
This heavy clumsy mess
Ruminate on this 
And ruminate on this

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 6/22/2011 1:20:00 AM
"fragrance Of decaying smells of worthlessness"-You nailed it with that line sir! Very cool words and patterns on this delivery.
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Date: 6/17/2011 12:29:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry today Paul. Have yourself a wonderful inspiration filled weekend I will be back to read more Monday. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/16/2011 6:01:00 PM
butter fingers? snort..what a night, coming off a dream
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Date: 6/16/2011 6:01:00 PM
butter fingers? snort..what a night, coming off a dream
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Paul Keenan
Date: 6/16/2011 6:52:00 PM
What is the snort a bout?
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Paul Keenan
Date: 6/16/2011 6:51:00 PM
Date: 6/16/2011 6:00:00 PM
both heavy and clumsy huh wow..
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