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Ruminate On This

She has a proclivity in being jaunty As she looks down the asphalt way With stunted growth of apple orchards That blossom in the spring They begin; they begin A carefree end To what was swollen, bloated, and rotten And wickedness emitting the fragrance Of decaying smells of worthlessness Across the waters, floating and wet She catches the why and emulates the peacefulness On cargo ships at heaven’s gate And longing for the weight to be lifted, And longing for the weight to be lifted. This heavy clumsy mess This heavy clumsy mess Ruminate on this And ruminate on this

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Date: 6/22/2011 1:20:00 AM
"fragrance Of decaying smells of worthlessness"-You nailed it with that line sir! Very cool words and patterns on this delivery.
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Date: 6/17/2011 12:29:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry today Paul. Have yourself a wonderful inspiration filled weekend I will be back to read more Monday. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/16/2011 6:01:00 PM
butter fingers? snort..what a night, coming off a dream
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Date: 6/16/2011 6:01:00 PM
butter fingers? snort..what a night, coming off a dream
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Paul Keenan
Date: 6/16/2011 6:52:00 PM
What is the snort a bout?
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Paul Keenan
Date: 6/16/2011 6:51:00 PM
Date: 6/16/2011 6:00:00 PM
both heavy and clumsy huh wow..
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