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*Image of Rumi Quotes by Twitter. Rumi Nuff for Us Drizzling passes by filters a rainbow, its aqua burst nigh as simple dews grow, filters a rainbow, drizzling passes by as simple dews grow, its aqua burst nigh. Tattles chartreuse fronds of its bless descent, splash in hidden ponds faces smile advent, of its bless descent, tattles chartreuse fronds, faces smile advent, splash in hidden ponds. Petals drift downward like musical notes suite heard through the fjord, its harmonic floats, like musical notes, petals drift downward its harmonic floats, suite heard through the fjord. Birdsong through the vale, up along the lea, magic wove a tale, sung aloud for me, up along the lea, birdsong through the vale, sung aloud for me, magic wove a tale. Deep lush spectacles a trade sparks exact, dipping projectiles indulgent contact, a trade sparks exact deep lush spectacles, indulgent contact, dipping projectiles. Nature dwells in us for a better life, champ's mindset adjust to keep your dream rife, for a better life, nature dwells in us to keep your dream rife champ's mindset adjust. Sprinkled beauty's charm challenges as subtle, they are arm in arm the perfect couple, challenges as subtle, sprinkled beauty's charm the perfect couple, they are arm in arm. 2022 July 30 *1st Place* Rhyme Rumi ~~Sotto Poet: Judged 2022 August 12 *Rhyme Reversal RZ aabb, ccdd, eeff, ... SC 10 syllables per 28 lines ++SC preferred o'er HMS as the word "lea" is counted as two syllables ``PS Grammar & SC - Total Word Count = 198 *Title excluded

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Constance La France

Date: 8/17/2022 1:55:00 PM

Hilo, beautiful poem and writing and congratulations on your win in the contest, blessings ~Constance

Hilo Poet
Date: 8/17/2022 3:01:00 PM

Thanks aplenty, Constance, I appreciate it my friend, Aloha~William

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/16/2022 3:24:00 AM

Congratulations on your winning work. Way to go. Sara

Hilo Poet
Date: 8/16/2022 7:44:00 AM

Thanks, Sara, much appreciated my friend, Aloha~William

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/15/2022 11:25:00 AM

Interesting singalong charm! Congratulations, Hilo!

Hilo Poet
Date: 8/15/2022 11:51:00 AM

Thanks, Kim, for your devotion to great commenting my friend, Aloha~William

Pashang Salehi

Date: 8/14/2022 8:02:00 PM

I declare that you are an honorary Persian. Congratulations.

Hilo Poet
Date: 8/14/2022 8:13:00 PM

Then I'm honored, Pashang, truly my friend, Aloha~William

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/14/2022 2:11:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. WOW!!! A "Creative" write. I also love the picture. Have a blessed day writing away...............

Hilo Poet
Date: 8/14/2022 3:06:00 PM

Thank you, Paula, for the reading and shared comment, a blessed day to you, Aloha~William

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 8/13/2022 6:22:00 AM

Terrific win William. A beautiful write filled with imagery and sensual love. Congratulations! Linda

Hilo Poet
Date: 8/13/2022 6:46:00 PM

Rummaging me for a thank you, Linda, I appreciate it my friend, Aloha~William

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/12/2022 9:39:00 PM

Wow William, this is impressive! This form seems very challenging to me. Congratulations on your fantastic deserving First Place. Blessings and Aloha xxoo

Hilo Poet
Date: 8/12/2022 11:30:00 PM

Thank you so much--a bit of a twister type of challenge that works coming or going, Connie, it's always good hearing from you my friend, Aloha~William

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 7/31/2022 3:57:00 PM

You have beautified and objectified very well, Rumi's inspirations, gl in the contest, this is amazing , Vi e

Hilo Poet
Date: 7/31/2022 4:38:00 PM

Thanks, Vie, nice avatar, that's what my kids call our pics, love your sentiments, hoping all's well, my friend, Aloha~William