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Rumi Nuff For Us
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Rumi Nuff for Us
Drizzling passes by filters a rainbow,
its aqua burst nigh as simple dews grow,
filters a rainbow, drizzling passes by
as simple dews grow, its aqua burst nigh.
Tattles chartreuse fronds of its bless descent,
splash in hidden ponds faces smile advent,
of its bless descent, tattles chartreuse fronds,
faces smile advent, splash in hidden ponds.
Petals drift downward like musical notes
suite heard through the fjord, its harmonic floats,
like musical notes, petals drift downward
its harmonic floats, suite heard through the fjord.
Birdsong through the vale, up along the lea,
magic wove a tale, sung aloud for me,
up along the lea, birdsong through the vale,
sung aloud for me, magic wove a tale.
Deep lush spectacles a trade sparks exact,
dipping projectiles indulgent contact,
a trade sparks exact deep lush spectacles,
indulgent contact, dipping projectiles.
Nature dwells in us for a better life,
champ's mindset adjust to keep your dream rife,
for a better life, nature dwells in us
to keep your dream rife champ's mindset adjust.
Sprinkled beauty's charm challenges as subtle,
they are arm in arm the perfect couple,
challenges as subtle, sprinkled beauty's charm
the perfect couple, they are arm in arm.
2022 July 30
*1st Place*
Rhyme Rumi
~~Sotto Poet: Judged 2022 August 12
*Rhyme Reversal
RZ aabb, ccdd, eeff, ... SC 10 syllables per 28 lines
++SC preferred o'er HMS as the word "lea" is counted as two syllables
``PS Grammar & SC - Total Word Count = 198 *Title excluded
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