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ashen-faced neighbors slow-motion explosion the pretty dollhouse melts into the cul-de-sac 3/2/2021

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Date: 3/2/2021 8:48:00 AM
Agree with Richard, PS....the square one stands upon is my singular reality
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Date: 3/2/2021 9:10:00 AM
unique perscpective ;) Thank you James for the feedback. ~ps
Date: 3/2/2021 7:12:00 AM
All is not as it seems. A very affective write. ;0)
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Date: 3/2/2021 8:24:00 AM
Yes, exactly :( thank you for the visit and comment Richard. I appreciate the feedback! ~ps

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