Rumblings

ashen-faced neighbors
slow-motion explosion
the pretty dollhouse
melts into the cul-de-sac


3/2/2021
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Goff Avatar
March 2, 2021 at 8:48 AM
Agree with Richard, PS....the square one stands upon is my singular reality
Awtry Avatar
March 2, 2021 at 9:10 AM
unique perscpective ;) Thank you James for the feedback. ~ps
Lamoureux Avatar
March 2, 2021 at 7:12 AM
All is not as it seems. A very affective write. ;0)
Awtry Avatar
March 2, 2021 at 8:24 AM
Yes, exactly :( thank you for the visit and comment Richard. I appreciate the feedback! ~ps
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