Poet Tacito Poet Free verse

Rules and Regulations

How long did it take her to be free?

How long did it take
For the wingless dragonfly to finally open her heart to the world

How long did it take for her to overcome Devil’s workshop
Slowly caressing her retinas
With silky daffodils and two-faced tulips

Where
Now
She dives into a glistening pool of complicated risk
Opening her atrium to the masses

Shedding incumbent teardrops
Just for that one standing ovation
To SET
HER
FREE!

It was then
Where pieces of plastic chains fell from demure stratosphere

Dented taps, similar to a shoeless dancer,
Setting off bass tones and low-key monotony

For she was
One cholesterol filled syllable short
To be genuine

One tearful, hyphenated lyric
Too blunt
To be embraced by their “god”

One dilapidated vowel shy
Of being honest

Her diary didn’t have enough pages torn
From emerald sanity

There were too many “Wows”,
Diluting into disingenuous shoulder pats

Her stanza pushed aside

A glorified booty call with no call back number
Leaving messages towards empty dial tones

…

How long will it take her to be free?

Until she looks up
Knowing she already holds the key

©Drake J. Eszes

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Lillie Williams February 13, 2014 at 7:24 PM Freedom Drake is what we all want to be, but yet sometimes we are bound by the simple things of life. The question is just what you said. "How long will it take to be free?' Another mind opener, greatly written. Poet Tacito February 13, 2014 at 10:51 PM I wholly agree! It's very nice to meet you, Lillie! Thank you very much!

Charmaine Chircop October 30, 2013 at 6:00 PM You have soup in your mail : ) Poet Tacito October 30, 2013 at 7:18 PM Ok. :)

Karen Anglesey June 9, 2013 at 9:59 AM Love the theme. You have written energetic inspiration to keep doing what burns inside of us even when we feel discouraged. The metaphor in this is spectacular :) Poet Tacito June 9, 2013 at 10:04 AM You got that right. ;) Thank you so much, Karen!

Eileen Manassian June 4, 2013 at 3:59 AM What a powerful and beautiful ending, Drake! :) Freedom lies within us. Love that thought! The imagery is so intricate... HUGS! Poet Tacito June 4, 2013 at 7:19 AM You got that right. ;) I seriously appreciate your commentary on this. Thanks so much!

Charmaine Chircop May 28, 2013 at 1:37 AM cont..Its the heart's tick tock..Do i get it or am i an ignoramus hi ho ?: ) Many poems WOW me to use your WoWs above but then there are others which get a bit deeper beneath my skin..tickling my senses making me want to read more..Going to my favs :) Poet Tacito May 28, 2013 at 1:37 PM Yes, it should go beyond the R&R. But, not always. Sadly. You are no "ignoramus hi ho". LOL You're pretty on point with your perspective of this. And I'm happy to tickle your senses. Mission accomplished. :) Thanks so much, Charmaine!

Charmaine Chircop May 28, 2013 at 1:32 AM A lady dragon fly opening her atrium to the masses using her key..Wishing its a master key to all empty holes of their heart.It is risky indeed to open the atrium to the masses not knowing if she ll be loved of her believes and thoughts penned.Sometimes we care so much of what others think about us and our writing.We just want to please them too much but the best words flow when we don t think of what others are expecting and let our soul free.Poetry goes beyond rules and regulations.

Courtney Courtney May 22, 2013 at 12:58 AM nice Poet Tacito May 22, 2013 at 6:29 AM Hi, Ruth! Thank you much!

Karen Anglesey May 19, 2013 at 12:44 AM Each line is rich in detail that creates an extraordinary journey for the reader. I see a struggling poet needing to unleash confidence. Great writing :) Poet Tacito May 19, 2013 at 7:06 AM You're on track. The problem is that the poet faces a hypocrisy amongst others who have already done the same. Yet, they're telling that poet how it should be done. Which is pointless & entirely ironic. Thank you so much for stopping by, Karen. :)

Colleen Bono May 17, 2013 at 9:36 AM nicely worded piece here.thanks for your visit.take care Poet Tacito May 17, 2013 at 9:38 AM Hi Colleen! Thanks so much! Hope to see you again soon!

Nette Onclaud May 16, 2013 at 7:21 PM okay, time;s up.. it;s been a week!.. see your new poem soon.. tag!..:) huggs Poet Tacito May 16, 2013 at 11:45 PM It's been 2 days! LOL You're adorable. More soon. ;)

John Loving Iii May 16, 2013 at 6:29 AM Its been a while Drake but I can tell your serious about poetry. I look at this piece as one woulg a fine painting. Good job! Very good job! Jhlovingiii Poet Tacito May 16, 2013 at 7:47 AM Hey there, John! It's been quite a while. I think we all know somebody like that. Thank you for your very kind words! John Loving Iii May 16, 2013 at 6:30 AM Wonder if I know her.

Elai Cee May 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM wow! this is nice. I like the figurative languages you used here... and thank you for visiting my page---keep smiling, Elai Poet Tacito May 16, 2013 at 7:41 AM Hi there, Elai! :) Thank you so very much. I certainly will.

Donna Jones May 15, 2013 at 9:28 PM Ya know some poems are great with just the first line..this is one of them..the rest just adds the spice. Great job... Poet Tacito May 15, 2013 at 9:38 PM Hey there, Donna!!! :) That's awesome of you to say. Thank you so much! YAY FOR SPICE!

Len Gasun May 15, 2013 at 8:57 AM This is really very beautiful poem and image! You're indeed a great poet my dear friend Drake! An outstanding gem and masterpiece! Thank you so much for sharing and your very inspiring comment on my poem! Have a great day! love and hugs, Leonora Poet Tacito May 15, 2013 at 8:59 AM Hi there, Leonora! I really appreciate your words on this. Many thanks to you!

David De La Croes May 15, 2013 at 8:11 AM Sometimes our wondering questions become answers filled with wonderment. You, too, holds the key to unlocking mysteries in poetic wonderment! Thanks for sharing, Jake, and thanks for your visit and comment! David Poet Tacito May 15, 2013 at 8:33 AM Good morning, David! Couldn't agree more with you. Thank you so much for stopping by!

Richard Lamoureux May 15, 2013 at 6:54 AM You sure have a way with words. I love the images you have conjured up here, simply breathtaking. Poet Tacito May 15, 2013 at 7:29 AM Thank you very, very much Richard! I do what I can. :)

Don Johnson May 14, 2013 at 5:32 PM deeper still than daffidills, 2 faced tulips on parade, magic of poetry instils, the words and spells charade... good one mate.... Poet Tacito May 14, 2013 at 5:50 PM Hey Don! Thanks so much for that! :)

Timothy Hicks May 14, 2013 at 12:58 PM I've been seeing your name a lot around here and finally decided to check out your page. I am impressed! There were many above-and-beyond good lines, but my favorite was this... "She dives into a glistening pool of complicated risk"... that right there is GOLD! I don't know who you wrote this for, but she's one lucky girl to have this written for... superb job! Poet Tacito May 14, 2013 at 1:08 PM Hi, Tim!!!! Nice to meet you! :) That's truly kind of you to say. To be honest, I didn't write this for any lady in particular. That said, I did mean for it to resonate with others. Thanks so much for stopping by!

Nette Onclaud May 14, 2013 at 10:25 AM gotta hand it to you,drake... this style of writing is like an examination of the spirit... and that somehow it seems glorious, absurd, abstract, sad and yet all too beauifully mixed like glimpses of life... wow!..:) huggs Poet Tacito May 14, 2013 at 10:47 AM (Blush) Your words are uplifting. I'm pleased that you truly grasp where I'm going with this. A glimpse, indeed. :) Thank you so much!

Anne-Lise Andresen May 14, 2013 at 9:49 AM - Drake, a wonderful poem .......... top rated from me! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :) Poet Tacito May 14, 2013 at 9:59 AM Hi, Anne Lise! :) Thank you so very much! You're too kind.

Kim Van Breda May 14, 2013 at 8:30 AM Excellent poem-- love the form and use of antonyms and analogy's you have incorporated to describe the subject matter. Loved the line" Her diary didn't have enough pages torn from emerald sanity" Poet Tacito May 14, 2013 at 8:31 AM Hi Kim! :) I'm pleased you noticed that! Thank you so very much!

Sasha Maharaj May 14, 2013 at 8:30 AM Brilliant. :) Love it Poet Tacito May 14, 2013 at 8:30 AM Hi Sasha! Thank you so much! :)