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Ruins

Dwellings on a wall, Remnants of humanity; Adobe remains.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 8/4/2009 1:02:00 PM
wonderful piece of art forces one to dig into thoughts. thanks cheers
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Date: 6/28/2009 11:56:00 AM
Super Senryu Raul, so vivid in so few lines>>James
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Date: 6/27/2009 10:16:00 AM
Excellent work, Raul. Great description of the ruins. Love Elizabeth
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Date: 6/27/2009 5:18:00 AM
destruction--sadness---nothing much left---just Ruins---awesome---------------charma
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Date: 6/26/2009 9:05:00 PM
magnificent understanding in a concise format! wow Raul!! jim
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Date: 6/26/2009 8:38:00 PM
Raul, you are the master..this is perfect. BG
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