Ruins

Dwellings on a wall,
Remnants of humanity;
Adobe remains.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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August 4, 2009 at 1:02 PM
wonderful piece of art forces one to dig into thoughts. thanks cheers
Fraser Avatar
June 28, 2009 at 11:56 AM
Super Senryu Raul, so vivid in so few lines>>James
Neal Avatar
June 27, 2009 at 10:16 AM
Excellent work, Raul. Great description of the ruins. Love Elizabeth
Chircop Avatar
June 27, 2009 at 5:18 AM
destruction--sadness---nothing much left---just Ruins---awesome---------------charma
Goff Avatar
June 26, 2009 at 9:05 PM
magnificent understanding in a concise format! wow Raul!! jim
Gorelick Avatar
June 26, 2009 at 8:38 PM
Raul, you are the master..this is perfect. BG
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