Sara Kendrick Poet Cinquain

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I live in a rural setting close to a small town..Not a big city..DEA did a drug bust over the week end..

Ruined

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                                                   Drug bust
                                                 Few arrested
                                     Two pushers_man and wife
                               Meth the drug being sold and used
                                                     Ruined

In honor of Brian's contest, 
Up to five /any theme

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Doris Culverhouse October 29, 2011 at 9:54 AM did you know them? Co-man ok?

Elizabeth Wesley October 28, 2011 at 10:28 AM Lots of information in so few lines. Well told Sara. :)

Carolyn Devonshire October 27, 2011 at 6:20 PM Sadly, this type of thing is being seen all over the country. You packed quite a punch into five lines, Sara. Great message. Best wishes in the contest. Love, Carolyn

Charles Henderson October 27, 2011 at 4:55 PM amazing the amount of info one can pack into this form. Very good

Linda-Marie Sweetheart October 27, 2011 at 4:52 PM nice entry Sara.. much luck .. this happens so much in the inner cities my friend.. nice presentation...luv..

Carol Sunshine Brown October 27, 2011 at 12:32 PM Stopping by to thank you for your kind comments on my writing Sara. I enjoyed reading yours today. Love, Carol

Kash Poet October 27, 2011 at 6:42 AM Very nice use of the form to describe this sad incident Sara.Enjoyed. Best wishes.

Nathan D. October 27, 2011 at 6:31 AM damn that meth anyways. great cinquain good luck in contest

Andrea Dietrich October 27, 2011 at 12:53 AM Like something you may have just seen on the news (almost any day of the week sadly!) Good luck in the contest, Sara.

Russell Sivey October 26, 2011 at 3:16 PM Yeah, what a waste of someones life, doing or selling drugs! Such a destructive thing! Excellent subject for great originality! Awesome job!!

Jessica Arteaga October 26, 2011 at 1:23 PM a man and wife? wow.. will at least they were in it together :( this kinda reminds of that jim carrey movie dick and jane where normal folks loose their jobs and end up doig abnormal means to pay for their life style, i wonder if they were one of those cases. (funny movie but the reality harsh)