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Ruffled Leaves

ruffled leaves
in the early hours
bewildered hen

12/12/16

1st place
"Nature" Themed
hosted by M. Talbot

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Susan Gentry

April 18, 2018 at 9:15 PM

Congratulations on your win!

Moon Flower

April 19, 2018 at 8:54 PM

Thank you, Susan. :)

Eve Roper

April 17, 2018 at 9:56 PM

Great Haiku, Moon Flower, congratulation on your win! :) .. Hugs Eve

Moon Flower

April 19, 2018 at 8:53 PM

Thank you, Eve. :)

Roy Pett

April 17, 2018 at 4:22 PM

Congratulations on your well deserved win Moon flower, excellent Haiku. :))

Moon Flower

April 19, 2018 at 8:52 PM

Thank you, Roy. :)

Kim Rodrigues

April 17, 2018 at 10:33 AM

Very nicely done, Moon Flower!

Moon Flower

April 19, 2018 at 8:51 PM

Thank you, Kim. :)

Jean Murray

April 17, 2018 at 9:11 AM

Poor hen but what a wonderful haiku from your pen Moon Flower. Congratulations on top spot.

Moon Flower

April 19, 2018 at 8:50 PM

Thank you, Jean. :)

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

April 17, 2018 at 9:02 AM

Wonderful Haiku! Congratulations on your top win! :) xomo!

Moon Flower

April 19, 2018 at 8:50 PM

Thank you, Maureen. :)

L. J. Carber

April 17, 2018 at 8:52 AM

Congrats, Moon Flower, on your 1st place--very nice!

Moon Flower

April 19, 2018 at 8:49 PM

Thank you, L.J. :)

Jan Allison

April 17, 2018 at 8:48 AM

congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx

Moon Flower

April 19, 2018 at 8:49 PM

Thanks you, Jan. hugs :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

April 17, 2018 at 8:01 AM

- Congratulations on your 1st place in the contest, Moon Flower :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Moon Flower

April 19, 2018 at 8:48 PM

Thank you, Anne-Lise. hugs back. :)

Mick Talbot

April 17, 2018 at 7:50 AM

This is an exceptional haiku, I can picture a fox, even a snake rustling the the leaves. However, had it not of been I would have downgraded it. No haiku should be titled, or signed if you follow the Japanese tradition. Sadly in these modern days signing is a must to maintain one's copyright, etcetera, but titles, no need, spoils the surprise, the name of the form suffices. Well deserved congratulations, Moon flower... Mick

Moon Flower

April 19, 2018 at 8:47 PM

Thank you for this, Mick. It's actually a pivot one in which the "first line one and then line three should both be grammatically connected to the middle line" ruffled leaves, in the early hours, bewildered hen OR bewildered hen, in the early hours, ruffled leaves. :)