Written December 15. 2024
for In a Tizzy, twelve lines or less contest
by Miranda Hawley
Santa's problem was Rudolph's crutch. And, also, Rudolph whined way too much. We need help pulling the sleigh tonight Another Reindeer might fix our plight. An animal rescue said, "we've got three dogs, ten birds, and an ocelot." We'll take the dogs and birds and thank you. Okay, so what should those ten birds do? Amazing, but they flew pretty good. Santa said he was betting they would. Dogs left 'neath trees for children to pet, and it was named, "The Best Christmas Yet" Although the weather was quite icy, Rudolph's broken leg healed nicely.
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