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RUDOLPH THE BROWN NOSED REINDEER

Rudolph paled because his nose turned brown He couldn’t smile so he wore a frown Santa wiped a tear from the reindeer’s eye He hated to see poor Rudolph cry Santa sprinkled on some Christmas dust The nose is now red not a dark shade of rust So look out of your window on Christmas night You will see Rudolph’s red nose shining bright Jan Allison 6th December 2014

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Date: 12/19/2014 6:44:00 PM
Great title for a limerick... I might steal it! Well done, Jan!
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 12/19/2014 6:46:00 PM
I was going to have a different take on how Rudolph's nose REALLY got brown - then I thought better of it lol:-) Hugs jan xxx
Date: 12/18/2014 4:22:00 PM
Cute Jan!
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 12/18/2014 4:25:00 PM
Thanks Richard:-) Hugs jan xxx
Date: 12/14/2014 10:53:00 AM
the minute i saw the title i smiled very beautifully crafted piece excellent pen
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 12/14/2014 11:39:00 AM
Thanks Liam glad you enjoyed it:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 12/13/2014 4:22:00 PM
LOL, I thought this would be kind of rude - love this sweet write
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Date: 12/14/2014 3:54:00 AM
Me rude - oh am blushing at the very thought lol:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 12/10/2014 2:18:00 AM
thanks for Santa comments, I liked Rudolph's nose rhyming couplets are a gteat vehicle fffffor messages. We seem to be on a similar wavelength, hugs returned Mike
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 12/10/2014 3:33:00 AM
Many thanks for dropping by Mike I do appreciate your comment:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 12/8/2014 7:35:00 PM
sparkling Jan, This certainly brings on the Christmas Joy!! I wonder if he had a bit of a cold!!! Bless you Kevin
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 12/9/2014 1:03:00 AM
Thanks Kevin:-) Hugs Jan x
Date: 12/8/2014 6:49:00 PM
Thanks for the Christmas spirit lady.Lovely!
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 12/9/2014 1:03:00 AM
Thanks Charmaine:-) Hugs jan x
Date: 12/8/2014 1:40:00 PM
charming read from you, jan... a feel-good story, hohoho... huggs
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 12/8/2014 2:12:00 PM
Thanks so much for the lovely comment Nette:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 12/8/2014 12:01:00 PM
Rudolph's Christmas came early...thanks to Santa .... and Jan!! Very enjoyable write. hugs // paul
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 12/8/2014 2:11:00 PM
Thanks so much Paul:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 12/7/2014 5:01:00 PM
I shall look with my kids, aged, 26 - 25 - 23 - 19 - if they say don't be daft, I'll laugh, thinking of your poem - hugs xx
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Date: 12/7/2014 5:11:00 PM
lol James:-) Hugs jan xxx
Date: 12/7/2014 8:30:00 AM
The title had me ...... expecting something more "limerickian".
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Date: 12/7/2014 8:38:00 AM
Thanks John:-) Hugs jan x
Date: 12/7/2014 4:00:00 AM
Santa to the rescue, there is still the question of that motorbike. You didn't think Rudolph forgot did you?
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 12/7/2014 5:13:00 AM
The motorbike is reserved for deliveries on the Isle of Man the home of the TT races - you can't blame Rudolph for wanting a bit of fun:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 12/7/2014 12:06:00 AM
very amusing and witty write
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Date: 12/7/2014 5:12:00 AM
Thanks Nathan:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 12/6/2014 7:48:00 PM
very cute, Jan, when I saw your title,however, I presumed you were gonna be naughty elf and write about how he is a brown noser to Santa!!!
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 12/6/2014 8:00:00 PM
Me naughty - no never!!!! hugs jan xxx
Date: 12/6/2014 5:41:00 PM
I was just wondering how Rudolph got a brown nose? Maybe following Santa to close? I have an over active imagination. Loved the poem and you more!!
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 12/6/2014 6:43:00 PM
oh that made me giggle David! Hugs Jan xxx
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David Meade
Date: 12/6/2014 5:49:00 PM
Ah yes, very nice!! I had a dog that was a crotch smeller -- very embarrassing!!
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 12/6/2014 5:45:00 PM
He was actually too close to Dancer - i was going to put that in the poem but left it to your imagination! Your comment made me smile thank you so much :-) love and hugs jan xxx
Date: 12/6/2014 4:54:00 PM
This is great...I just saw a whole stage of Rudolph's.... Hugs Tim
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 12/6/2014 4:55:00 PM
aww cute - hope none of them had brown noses! Hugs jan xx