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like water … I loved you - dove, swam, immersed, drowned … like breath, out, in, saturated, gasping … unseen, but essential - impalpable, yet vital … my sea … deep, boundless, capricious, blue … terrifying … my sky … vast, moody, dazzling, blue … and dark … you … were my element - oxygen for my fire, the breeze to kiss my cheek … a stream to cool … and christen, the expanse to cast my sails upon … you … were my aliment - manna from the heavens … my sustenance … and I, starving, devoured you … to starve. Copyright © Gregory Richard Barden, October 27, 2022

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