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*This sonnet was majestically composed in collaboration with the lovely and brilliant Rose Gregoire.

Rude Awakenings No Longer Deferred

How long was I asleep like a proud bug
deep in her nest? All of my life was ease
and wealth until I became a bit smug—
and all about was hunger, dearth, and disease! 
So cozy was life that I was content,
snug, self-assured, sure, and self-satisfied
without awareness of my confident
pride and the fact that I was gratified. 
Crash! Why is my world so swiftly shattered? 
My hopes and dreams quake, rattle, and quiver!
Clattering are my hands; my luggage tattered! 
Collision strikes as I now shake and shiver.
      From above—life goals now reveal with brute force: 
      I'll forge ahead anon without remorse!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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