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Rude Awakening

Sleep at night 
     Dreamworld's kite
     Morning light
     Open eyes, OH what a sight !
     Brown Recluse delight
     On my hand, next to nose, face turned white !
     Big brown spider clinging tight
     Jump from bed with all might
     Primal life or death fight
     Heart pounding flight 
     Rude awakening fright
     Lucky no bite
     Spiders crawling on me while asleep not right !

     2/26/17 An Unwanted Guest poetry contest

Copyright © Bruce Adams | Year Posted 2017

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Andrea Dietrich Date: 3/6/2017 4:52:00 PM NO WIN?? DANG!!! (I think it was judged, right?) Let me know, Bruce, if I am missing any great poems of yours. I am thinking I may have seen them all. Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 2/26/2017 8:27:00 PM I hear we swallow a few spiders every year in our sleep. Ugggg Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 2/26/2017 8:26:00 PM Hey, Bruce, great minds think alike. I did a bug too. Not quite posted yet. Soon! Love your spider poem. Isn't Twilight the vampire book written by the youth from Utah? My daughter loved all the set. Login to Reply

Doug Vinson Date: 2/26/2017 7:25:00 PM Whoa.... You picked a good one, Bruce. Nicely done! : ) Login to Reply Bruce Adams Date: 2/26/2017 7:40:00 PM Thank you, it's actually a true experience !