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Ruben's Sandwich

Hey diddle diddle
We poets will fiddle
With poems that jump over the moon.
But sometimes we blunder
He still claps like thunder
And soon we are smiling a tune.

While he sits on his tuffet
and gobbles his sandwich
He brings a smile with each comment he makes
Collecting his wits,
With humorous bits
Jay Leno would gladly be paid!

To have him crack jokes
He cheers all the folks
Who stay up by light of the moon

Even little dogs laugh, 
While the rest of us grin
You're a great guy, we love you! ... Ruben!!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 4/7/2013 7:03:00 PM
congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 4/6/2013 8:05:00 AM
Excellent Carrie! You inspired me to write a terrible limerick about Ruben! Congratulations! I love your free verse!
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Date: 4/5/2013 10:15:00 PM
A fine tribute to the Master of the short poem! RAY
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Date: 4/5/2013 8:13:00 PM
Ha love this Carrie, Rubens a fun guy here on the soup, this is a nice and lovely tribute. Congratulations!!! God bless your blessing poem. Goodnight*LINDA
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Date: 4/5/2013 5:15:00 PM
I remember this rhythmical and fun sweet poem. A well deserved win for a very deserving poet.
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Date: 4/5/2013 7:29:00 AM
I hear ya Carrie!...So proud to call him a friend...LOVE the nursury rhyme theme here and I could just eat that title up! (though Mr. Ortello might not approve) - Tim
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Date: 4/4/2013 9:21:00 PM
Congrats on your win. ~A.O
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Date: 4/4/2013 9:07:00 PM
Good one there....great tribute...great win. Goodness.
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Date: 4/4/2013 8:09:00 PM
This was fun congratulations. Thanks for entering.
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Date: 4/4/2013 8:08:00 PM
Congress Carrie..Donna
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Date: 4/4/2013 7:18:00 PM
this is charming, carrie! congratulations on your win for this lovely tribute...
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Date: 3/27/2013 8:03:00 AM
Very pleasing jaunty rhythm here. I can't help but smile at the last verse! The whole thing is funny though; you have a great gift with words.
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Date: 3/24/2013 5:02:00 PM
Clever take ofF here Catie, I hope RUBEN WONT GET THE BIG HEAD from this tribute.
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Date: 3/24/2013 4:10:00 PM
awwww, this is so sweet for Ruben!! clever gal. It is very much like a nursery rhyme. You GOT it.
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Date: 3/24/2013 9:17:00 AM
That poem of mine is not inspired by any painting:) Pure imagination.
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Date: 3/24/2013 9:19:00 AM
Oh..I just forgot.I wrote it for a contest of Constance long ago and yes there was a painting in the contest page.
Date: 3/24/2013 6:05:00 AM
hahaha..enjoyed this funny write! a very good tribute to Ruben.I love his jokes.
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Date: 3/23/2013 9:25:00 PM
Well said, Carrie! He doth make me smile!
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