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Rubber Soul Memories

Back seat of a '56 Chevy White with baby blue trim Cruising out of El Paso town Headed to the City of Angels She’s fast asleep on my lap Glorious western sunrise Static, crackling AM station Day Tripper on the radio

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 9/4/2015 8:00:00 PM
Oh, how I love The Beatles! The title caught my attention immediately. This poem is like a time capsule, creating such a wonderfully nostalgic atmosphere in so few lines. So happy to see you are still writing! I've been plagued by writer's block for ages, but you have inspired me to try again.
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Date: 8/11/2015 6:49:00 AM
A well written piece, it is beautiful and excellence........A.M.
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Date: 8/10/2015 9:23:00 PM
Great write Tim..was Jack or Sal driving?....loved it!....Peter
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Date: 8/10/2015 7:32:00 AM
Tim, love this randomling, it is so visual and upbeat, a wonderful 7 and thanks for visiting my randomling poem and for the nice comment
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