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Bite size 93 Line Gauthier
Like a butterfly you've changed and grown The transformation difficult and long Your delicate wings so beautiful to behold But fragile, breakable with one violent wind My breath tries to keep you aloft, till I'm blue and Ragged You begin to sink but a breeze from above slides under and lifts you

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Date: 11/14/2024 5:28:00 AM
Dear Crystal, Your poem tenderly captures the delicate dance of nurturing and letting go. You've beautifully created the bittersweet journey of growth, vulnerability, and resilience through the butterfly metaphor. I loved reading your artistry this morning. Autumn Blessings, MY Dear Friend, Daniel
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Date: 11/12/2024 11:22:00 PM
Mariposa Miracles; God's breath alive...heading to Eden...see you and Harvey there, CW. :o))
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Crystol Woods
Date: 11/13/2024 4:06:00 AM
Ok! Ty for reading my poetry! Xo
Date: 11/12/2024 3:14:00 PM
Beautiful poem Crystol. It almost sounds like a poem about a daughter.
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Crystol Woods
Date: 11/13/2024 4:05:00 AM
It is! So glad you saw that! Ty for stopping by! Xo
Date: 11/12/2024 11:05:00 AM
Hello Crystol, Butterflies are beautiful in all colors and shades. they are tiny and strong. Hugs. /Darlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/13/2024 9:51:00 AM
Hello Crystol, You are welcome. Hugs. xo/Darlene/
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Crystol Woods
Date: 11/13/2024 4:05:00 AM
Yess ty! Hugs xo

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