Rowing Upstream and Downstream

     Rowing downstream is one of life’s grandest pleasures
        while upstream’s difficulty is quite hard to measure

     You’ve got to dip those oars in right tight to the boat
        and if you're ahead of the current, make sure not to gloat
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De Beaulieu Avatar
August 17, 2024 at 3:59 PM
Hello Gershon, i would rather rowdown stream it would be easier. Enjoy your evening my friend. /Darlene/
De Beaulieu Avatar
August 18, 2024 at 12:14 PM
Hello Gershon, If i had someone else in the boat with me, and i was rowing, the boat would go in circles. I can not row straight. We would be dizzy. en joy your day my friend. /Darlene/
Wolf Avatar
August 17, 2024 at 8:36 PM
I would rather not row at all. Look, Mom, no hands! lol. Thanks, Darlene
Greenhough Avatar
August 16, 2024 at 2:49 PM
Also, make sure there is no waterfall ahead. This is a cute, picturesque poem.
George Avatar
August 16, 2024 at 7:02 AM
Rowing downstream is a pleasure while going upstream is pain as we have to row against the current. Life demands rowing downstream and upstream. When problems arise we have to hold the oar tight and row with caution. Even if we prove very successful, we shouldn't gloat over, but stay humble. Meaningful poem
Lawless Avatar
August 16, 2024 at 4:48 AM
alas, Gershon, it would seem that we are all drifting downstream while the oarsmen deny the upcoming waterfall.....
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