Rounding the Circle

ROUNDING     THE     CIRCLE

 
When this world races full circle, and I’m no longer mentor,
With no more locks to be keyed or flames to damp, 
I can at last saunter along the radius to the centre  - 
And this is the time I extinguish my lamp.

The only time I feel at ease is falling asleep. 
The daily burden is something I can’t just ignore,
Can’t just say ok someone else will do that  -  it’ll keep. 
My day’s now  circumscribed  --  I can’t make it more.

Check everything, for no one else will : my safety net is me.
When Morpheus reaches from the water and the ripple 
Of his arms enfolds me and I float in, it’s clear to see,
That we are concentric and can relax with the knowledge triple: 

First  -  I rounded it off to my best  -  inadequate, poor 
Maybe  -  but to the maximum  I tried and did it.
Second   -  maybe not perfectly   two   pi   r.
Third  -  but as near as dammit.
. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 

Written   by   Sydney   Peck  for  

Nette Onclaud’s  Contest    “IN 24 HOURS” 
29  September 2011
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011


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Date: 10/8/2011 9:04:00 PM
very deep and telling..how to so easily accept the loss on conscious controll..oh yes in sleep I can go anywhere but will it be where I want to go or where there are monsters? or will sleep be denied and I twirl in a snakes nest of sheets empty of all but me? No i do not relish the moment between wake and sleep i would preferr to KNOW where I go and with whom..sigh..excellent write dear..deep..brooding and mature! Light & Love
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Date: 10/8/2011 8:51:00 PM
hmmmm.... second time I've countered Morpheus today.. must google praps... dig the connectin' and sometimes baffled that.... things that make sense to me don't to you and .... vice versa.... as near as dammit and as far as wtf... of vice versa... digyarites muchly, Syd asyano~N
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Date: 10/8/2011 11:53:00 AM
A worthy example to follow Sid. Agape, Mopses
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