'roundabout Way'

there we were looking for directions to a place that don’t exist a place that you’ll only find with a password no one can remember so we’re bumping heads searching in the dark and the only thing I found was your heart with our fingers conversing in a language only they can decipher, we eventually found our way the password now forgotten we ended up in that place but we did it in a roundabout way
15/05/2011... 16:05

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 5/15/2011 12:22:00 PM
Somehow the message in this intriguing and well-penned poem reminded me of the song "Dancing in the Dark" by Bruce Springsteen. I don't think there is a password that allows us to enter someone's heart. I don't know if you've heard the song, but I think you'd like it, Wilma. Love and blessings, Carolyn
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Date: 5/15/2011 12:27:00 PM
heya Carolyn, I actually love that song of Bruce Springsteen ;) love W
Date: 5/15/2011 8:17:00 AM
This is an amazing write from you Wilma.Enjoyed...
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Date: 5/15/2011 8:05:00 AM
LOL, sounds like a wonderful way to meet. Yes, I'm having a great chill out Sunday - hope you are too, Wilma : )
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Date: 5/15/2011 7:52:00 AM
whatever works Wilma as your words are playful and exciting my friend.. that roundabout way was worth the journey it seems.. good one luv...
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Date: 5/15/2011 7:24:00 AM
Very demure passionate work..Enjoyed reading this morn..Sara
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