Round the Clock

I stay up late and still I wait 
 Just hopin' you will call 
 don't know how long I'll be awake 
 but the night's still young 'an all 
   
 Oh the clock's movin' faster 
 my makeup's getting dry 
 and my tears just start rollin' 
 whenever I sigh 
   
 ..It's a quarter to ten 
 Well, where are ya then? 
 Are you at home? I won't call to see 
 I figure if you have 
 any reason for gab 
you'll pick up the phone and call ME 
   
 Well, it's eleven o'clock 
 don't know if you'll stop 
 perhaps you'll drop by for a spell 
 But daddy's a'comin' 
 so you best make it quick 
 oh hurry! It's goin' on twelve! 
   
 ..One o'clock's here 
 You're still not in sight 
 perhaps it's just more than a sign 
 So I'll take off my face 
 retire to my place 
 to know I was wastin' my time.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 6/4/2017 8:08:00 AM
A great and sad write. Times are a changing, now some young women eagerly await a text that may never come. :) Amitiés
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Date: 6/3/2017 1:29:00 PM
Oh Gayle...so sad. Excellent spilling of tears.
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Gayle Rodd
Date: 6/3/2017 4:06:00 PM
You don't know how many times I waited up! lol
Date: 6/3/2017 11:20:00 AM
that was sad, Gayle; maybe you could call him first? overall i felt like the wait would be in vain, but nice piece. cheers!
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Gayle Rodd
Date: 6/3/2017 11:30:00 AM
Thank you for reading John. This was a case of 'teenage angst and an unrequited love I guess! I think I was 16
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