Round the Bend

Across the valley
A train whistles its presence
Quickly rushing on
A deep longing in my soul
To see what’s round the next bend

5/26/16
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Kendrick Avatar
June 11, 2016 at 7:19 PM
I can feel the longing and searching in this one..Very emotive and expressive work..Thanks for the visit to my page..I am sorry that it took me so long to return your comment on my work..Sara
A  Avatar
June 9, 2016 at 11:14 PM
:) nice
Fleming Avatar
May 31, 2016 at 2:29 PM
I do not know anything about Tankas, Barbara...But I recognize clever writing when I see it - Superbly penned! My very best regards...And warmest wishes. :) john P.s An obvious seven.
Richards Avatar
May 27, 2016 at 2:51 PM
I'm so glad to see you back again. Full throttle, and just as talented as always!! Hope you are feeling much better, Barbara !! :)
Smith Avatar
May 26, 2016 at 8:43 PM
Great work Barbara, best wishes in the contest...
Gorelick Avatar
May 26, 2016 at 8:51 PM
Thank you Charlie, glad to see you stop by.Barbara
Gorelick Avatar
May 26, 2016 at 8:50 PM
Thank you Charlie, I think in another life I was a pioneer...ha! Barbara
Deremer Avatar
May 26, 2016 at 4:40 PM
I liked your poem.
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