Round Faces Pegged In Squares

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Yesterday, we used the zoom app to video conference call family. A bunch of chatter. 

Hollywood squares, we would stare
at the set, as we do now in varying
shapes and sizes. 
                              Now family appears
in quaint little tablet squares -  some
sheltered-quiet,  or
                 eccentric with Eiffel
Tower backdrop,
           some ogling the others,

one with a gas mask face finding appall
and humor
                during this fathomless race,

slow like a tortoise who can’t mete a hare —
time recklessly drawn out,
                   the finish line

far out there. What will we find when
civilization restarts?

                             Will we be wearing rags,
our riches bagged up and sent to thrift?

I stare and inquire of the squares —
will we find our round
faces headed

      into outer space
   or going nowhere
at a fast pace?

Are we raptured? Are we done?
                      NO!

the session ended, no goodbyes

too - sudden as a hawk
we will find our hands
back in the land of the living
robotic pace of happenstance 

have we lost
a career,
gained weight,
kept up the humor
of the Hollywood Squares?

3/30/2020

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 3/31/2020 9:42:00 AM
The title of this captures the essence of the matter so very well. Interestingly constructed. Enjoyed the thoughtful write.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/31/2020 10:50:00 AM
Thank you, my friend!
Date: 3/30/2020 10:31:00 PM
Hollywood Squares is a perfect description! This is exactly what Zoom is like. Beautiful, Beautiful!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/30/2020 10:42:00 PM
Thanks, Caren! I’m looking in on the Tonight Show. Too crazy with everyone at their separate homes!
Date: 3/30/2020 10:11:00 PM
That's the way we have of keeping in touch now. Phone and computer. It's a blessing we have that. Good job here. God Bless, JB
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/30/2020 10:43:00 PM
Who would have thought that 2020 would turn such a corner as this!
Date: 3/30/2020 4:27:00 PM
I guess we are lucky to have that technology now - but it does feel like Hollywood Squares! Great line 'robotic pace of happenstance'!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/30/2020 5:04:00 PM
Thanks, Michelle! :)
Date: 3/30/2020 12:42:00 PM
Love these musings... I myself may look a bit shaggy. NO haircut for me. Now if I could only pull off a hunger strike (fat chance!), and let my clothes hang on me. Great poem -- really ignited my thoughts today! Thanks, Kim! :) gw
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/30/2020 12:46:00 PM
Thanks so much! :)
Date: 3/30/2020 11:18:00 AM
This poem about sums up the pandemic now, but the poem also brings hope and I do believe we will prevail as a people and be even stronger in will and purpose. Good work Kim!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/30/2020 12:47:00 PM
We will! Meanwhile we wait... Thanks!
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