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Rotational Poles

In a ravaging mind devoid of plain vision, all purpose of motion gets abandoned on hold once losing that stable clarity of judgment, still paying off judgments with tortures taxing mind; gusts fill tissues stable regardless of vision to load each vessel hold using sanguine motion. I present my motion to lungs before judgment, proving walls never hold since logic doesn’t mind the destructive vision in cosmic clues stable, this teeming soul stable directing with motion doppelganger visions sequestered for judgment once prevalent in mind with each mortal I hold. Such trajectories hold orbits rendered stable, illusions of the mind fooling sense of motion despite viral judgment from idols with vision provoking this vision enthralled in steady hold until the Last Judgment pulls apart my stable, a tremolo motion tearing the public mind. Such judgments of vision shall mind my living hold stable in fierce motion.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/4/2012 12:30:00 PM
Congratulations on making it through the 1st round of PoetrySoup International Contest. Wishing you the best in the finals John W. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/31/2011 7:56:00 AM
wowser now that one heck of a convoluted thought process, goodness, you and I would pick sestinas to enter which LOL I've been buff shining mine for over a year and folks still say [what huh?] I was actually trying to make them FEEL insanity..in yours perhaps you were trying to make us feel ..torn, rebuilt, growing beyond the bounds of rationallity? Any way I wanted to say NICE to read you again congrad's on getting through round 1. Light & Love
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Date: 12/12/2011 7:48:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week John. A well deserved feature. Love, Carol
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