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Rosy Dawn

ripping veil of night sun brushes glowing pink lights on trees and facades

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Jesse Zerlaut

Date: 8/17/2024 8:49:00 AM

This is an extremely awesome Haiku. I absolutely love the ending word if it's meaning isn't based upon the face of a building and instead upon covering or concealing one's true feelings. It speaks to me of the fact that nothing hides from the sun, not even painted expressions and words.

Beata Agustin

Date: 7/30/2024 7:05:00 AM

Wow! Thanks for sharing this... delightful and delighting from the start till the end... Thanks for your uplifting comment. God bless you.

Ink Empress

Date: 11/4/2023 6:44:00 AM

This is absolutely stunning! Gorgeous and very descriptive imagery! Loved reading this rosy gem!