Ross, a Very Good Man

My favorite hat says, “Air Force Mom”
Pink words printed on tan.
I wear it proudly, with aplomb.
Ross is my son; I am his fan.
He serves our country as a U.S. Airman.

War is no joke, not a sitcom.
Preserving our freedom a serious plan.
He does his job without a qualm.
Courageously risking his lifespan.
Protecting everyone, not just our clan.

Men like him deserve praise and psalm.
They burn in the heat while we get a suntan.
Whether sitting at desks or dropping a bomb,
Obeying orders, doing the best that they can.
I pray God preserves each serving airman.

I love my son with his demeanor calm.
Memories of his childhood I often scan.
Yes, I am a very proud “Air Force Mom.”
It wasn’t imagined in my life’s preplan.
My favorite hat, I wear for my son…a very good man.

© March 29, 2011
Dane Smith-Johnsen
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011


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Date: 4/9/2011 10:47:00 PM
sheer write, dane.. my best congrats all the way!! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 4/9/2011 6:34:00 PM
So cool to see you in the top five Dane. Congratulations on your worthy poem's honered 4th Place! The pleasure and honor of reading was mine. Agape, Moses
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Date: 4/9/2011 10:55:00 AM
Wonderful write .Congrats Dane on your win---kashinath
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Date: 4/9/2011 10:36:00 AM
Congratulations on the fourth place win in the contest, Dane
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Date: 4/8/2011 11:45:00 PM
Good for you. I would wear it too in the same circumstance. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 4/8/2011 10:16:00 PM
i loved it the first time I read it and do so more now. Many congrats for this win.
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Date: 4/8/2011 3:57:00 PM
Congrats Dane Ann on your 4th place win in the bonnet contest with this extraordinary entry my friend.. enjoy your top spot where the air is as rare as your lovely words.. and...thankxx for supporting my current contest too.. luv.. happy weekend ...
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Date: 4/8/2011 2:34:00 PM
A sensational tribute to a son and a honorable profession, dear Dane. Many congrats on your WIN. Lainie
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Date: 4/8/2011 2:01:00 PM
Dear Dane, Congratulations on your success in Carol's contest! Love you, Carolyn
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Date: 4/8/2011 1:15:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in my contest Dane Ann. The poems were all so good was hard to judge. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/30/2011 3:03:00 PM
Wonderful poetry, I really enjoyed reading your poetry today and I'm looking forward to reading more. Take care of yourself. Dana'lynn
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Date: 3/30/2011 8:27:00 AM
a beautiful poem, so touching and my prayers go out for your son and your family and you have every reason to be very proud of your son and for all the men and women who serve their country.
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Date: 3/29/2011 11:25:00 PM
this is a wonderful tribute to your son and you really accomplished the theme for quintain based on hat marvelously!! Good luck in the contest, Dane Ann
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Date: 3/29/2011 1:31:00 PM
Hon, I hope you'll send a copy of this poem to Ross! It clearly shows how much love you have in your heart for him. Beautifully written, Dane Ann. Wishing you success in Carol's contest with this unique and moving poem about your "Air Force Mom" hat! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/29/2011 8:39:00 AM
lovely sentiments, I'm sure your Son is as proud of his Mom as she is of him.,nicely done, I'm proud of you myself. Best regards David
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Date: 3/29/2011 2:47:00 AM
Standing tall serving a higher purpose. Excellent tribute to your son and our servicemen. Eavh one has a moither.
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