Rosie

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Yo listen up babe 

Had an ache in my head

So I swallowed a Bayer

Had a slight fever

So I took a chill pill

Had my eyes set on you

And your façade

So I call on sir Cupid 

To help me along

With some love potion

Number ..69

Everything was Rosie

So I thought 

Rosie this Rosie that

Best I ever had

She was so fine

We danced we wind

And dined

Till the early morning light

It is written it is said

We kissed

And off we went to bed

A dream came to me

Turned into a nightmare

Oh God 

I'm Hiv..


  



























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                                                     A.camacho jr.
                                                     1996-2015

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Daisy Marie Yant

Date: 10/28/2016 1:36:00 PM

Tony T. I am just now reading this. This is good. Everything ain't as Rosie as it should be. Much Love....a year or so later.

Tonytocaa Camacho
Date: 10/28/2016 3:59:00 PM

thanks miss Daisy,peace n love goin ur way..tonytocaa

Cynthia Jones

Date: 4/6/2015 3:19:00 PM

Great write Tony. Well done. :O) Keep up with the great work. Keep on penning. Thank you so very much for sharing your wonderful and creative talents with us. We all truly appreciate it. A 7 from me. *S* Cynthia

Tonytocaa Camacho
Date: 5/17/2020 12:04:00 PM

Thanks cynthia,peace to you hugs and stay safe ..tonytocaa