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Rosie

Yo listen up babe 

Had an ache in my head

So I swallowed a Bayer

Had a slight fever

So I took a chill pill

Had my eyes set on you

And your façade

So I call on sir Cupid 

To help me along

With some love potion

Number ..69

Everything was Rosie

So I thought 

Rosie this Rosie that

Best I ever had

She was so fine

We danced we wind

And dined

Till the early morning light

It is written it is said

We kissed

And off we went to bed

A dream came to me

Turned into a nightmare

Oh God 

I'm Hiv..


  



























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                                                     A.camacho jr.
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Yant Avatar
October 28, 2016 at 1:36 PM
Tony T. I am just now reading this. This is good. Everything ain't as Rosie as it should be. Much Love....a year or so later.
Camacho Avatar
October 28, 2016 at 3:59 PM
thanks miss Daisy,peace n love goin ur way..tonytocaa
Jones Avatar
April 6, 2015 at 3:19 PM
Great write Tony. Well done. :O) Keep up with the great work. Keep on penning. Thank you so very much for sharing your wonderful and creative talents with us. We all truly appreciate it. A 7 from me. *S* Cynthia
Camacho Avatar
May 17, 2020 at 12:04 PM
Thanks cynthia,peace to you hugs and stay safe ..tonytocaa
Nunez Avatar
April 2, 2015 at 12:00 PM
lol...I believe you know the moral of the story...good write...Kim :)
Camacho Avatar
April 2, 2015 at 12:48 PM
Hey Kim I think you're a dreamer and a believer like myself that's what we have in common thanks for all your support today love and peace Tony
Romaine Avatar
January 30, 2015 at 10:06 AM
Hey Tony, a great expression of the meaning of "just say no to lust". Great writing. Neva
Camacho Avatar
January 30, 2015 at 12:17 PM
Hi Neva ,thank you ..means a lot to me..moderation is the key ..??
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