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Rosey Thoughts

If I was a rose would you pick me Despite my green thorns all sticky Would you just place me near your nose And breathe in my fragrance so bold Would you have time to watch me grow Would you mind if I had a soul That was attached to vine on a picket fence Would you take me or leave me to fend For myself in the garden of lavender ladies Where love grows green wild and crazy Would you know me aside another Would you hold only me take many floral lovers If I was a character in your book Who would I be would you look Deep inside me despite my worn cover Would you be charmed and disarmed by no other If you knew me to be poison Would you still drink me And would last moments joy then Still refresh like mint tea If I wasn’t so pretty how could you see The loving ditty romantic side of me and sing There will always be a finer shape Will always see a lovelier face Will always seek more delicate grace Will you always find beside me your only place

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Date: 6/24/2024 7:21:00 PM
There may be a finer face or shape, but rarely a finer last stanza. Huzzah, Karen. ~ Gershon
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Karen Jones
Date: 6/24/2024 7:34:00 PM
Aw gee thanks Gershon! Hugs
Date: 6/24/2024 3:36:00 PM
Hello Karen, I love roses and I love lavender. My two favourite flowers. i would pick a rose with gloves on. it would be a red rose i love the red rose, yellow , pink .Hugs. Darlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/24/2024 4:23:00 PM
Hello Karen, no i do not have a garden. if i did I would grow roses and lavender. Those are my fav, flowers. Hugs. /Darlene/
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Karen Jones
Date: 6/24/2024 3:40:00 PM
Hugs roses are beautiful! Do you have a garden? Thanks for reading and hugs back.
Date: 6/24/2024 4:34:00 AM
It takes a special person to see the beauty of a thorn Karen! Your lovely poem echoes love's sweet sentiment and quest for fulfillment! I really enjoyed reading it this morning! Happy Monday!
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Karen Jones
Date: 6/24/2024 5:51:00 AM
Happy Monday Mike! I think that’s the sweetest thing written to me ever! You’re so kind and thoughtful thank you I appreciate that!
Date: 6/24/2024 3:49:00 AM
Can we stand to find our soulmate, stay faithful through thick and thin, til death us do part? A lovely write. Hugs ~ Kim
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Karen Jones
Date: 6/24/2024 5:49:00 AM
I’m a romantic so I believe that is possible Kim ! Hugs and thanks!
Date: 6/24/2024 3:21:00 AM
"There will always be a finer shape Will always see a lovelier face Will always seek more delicate grace Will you always find beside me your only place" - A poem highest in poesy. Your words flow flawlessly.
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Karen Jones
Date: 6/24/2024 5:48:00 AM
Thank you Christuraj!

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