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Roseville Sweetheart

In Roseville, this suburb of Sacramento, lives a pretty girl any boy would want to know. Strolling along in the sunshine of California, she has qualities that fill a cornucopia. Perhaps what the Beach Boys have said is true. I have found a sweet California Girl in you. Although I did not have to go to the west coast, everything I see about you is the most. You can make number one on any guy’s list. Do they allow women like you to exist? You make music that would calm a savage beast. How would you like to come with me to the east?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/2/2011 4:24:00 PM
Way to go, Robert. I like your rhyme scheme of aabb. I told you yesterday that I was posting a dandelion poem, but I had an exclamation mark in the title which rejected it. Now, I know better, so it is okay now.
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