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Inspired by the series Poldark.

Rose-Scented Siren

She humbled them all with one song;
the powerful and grieving,
the hardened and thieving.
Her voice was gentling, a lullaby;
a love song, alluring.
For a moment they’re all believing.
They can’t breathe or pull away from
her flaming red hair and sweet disposition.
They’d wondered why he married her.
Though they might originally have thought
that she was the same as the evening girls.
The ladies and gentlemen - both;
the old and young, enthralled.
They can’t breathe or pull away.
She’s like a rose-scented siren. Touché.
And her husband, at that very moment
falls deeply in love, and would dive
into the ocean depths, as if seeking
a sacred treasure chest, a myth.
She is his, though every hifalutin body
is floating on cloud nine, and knowing;
why…why her… duly answered.
This angel, in a Christmas gown, holds
a potent candle, that their fancy
can’t blow out; all hearts above the fray.
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Jones Avatar
October 29, 2025 at 6:31 PM
Omg! This is like a rich chocolate brownie melting in my mind’s mouth! I have no words to describe how amazing this is and how excited I am to have read it Kim! Fav!
Rodrigues Avatar
October 29, 2025 at 8:22 PM
Thank you so much, Karen! I am thrilled that you enjoyed!
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
October 25, 2025 at 11:24 AM
A nice array of subtle hints of rhyme "away" and "Touché", but accents of enjoyable exposé, "falls deeply in love, and would dive". Like I said, an enjoyable piece, faving, Aloha.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 25, 2025 at 12:48 PM
Oh, thank you so much for faving! Hugs, William!
Etgen-Baker Avatar
October 22, 2025 at 6:10 PM
how unique, Kim. Just liked it. Well done
Rodrigues Avatar
October 23, 2025 at 4:34 AM
Thank you, Sara! Hugs
Goldsmith Avatar
October 22, 2025 at 2:18 PM
Your "Rose-Scented Siren" is a wonderful write. I enjoyed reading. "Good Luck" If for a contest. Have a fun day writing away...............
Rodrigues Avatar
October 23, 2025 at 4:34 AM
Thank you, Paula! :)
Rodrigues Avatar
October 23, 2025 at 4:34 AM
Thank you, Paula! :)
Hind Avatar
October 21, 2025 at 8:21 PM
Mmmm, a siren might be strange, but a rose-scented one? that's special!! Have a good night, <3
Rodrigues Avatar
October 21, 2025 at 8:26 PM
Good night, Paige! Thank you!
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