Roses In a Vase

Roses in a vase
You have given me
Have now changed colors
From the bright redness

In a dullest red
Is a memory now
Faded roses gone 
The vase is empty

No longer empty 
The vase will be filled 
My love brought roses
To brighten my day
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Flaherty Avatar
November 10, 2020 at 5:03 PM
Made me think of my Mum She loves nothing more than Lillies to brighten her day
De Beaulieu Avatar
November 11, 2020 at 4:59 AM
Hello Christopher Flaherty,oh I am pleased to hear that I brought you a memory of your mom. Lillies are beautiful to. Enjoy your day my friend.
Dome Avatar
November 3, 2020 at 10:53 AM
How lovely. I used to give roses too. It's sad when they wither and die, but often, the memory remains. Well done.I'm a born romantic.
De Beaulieu Avatar
November 3, 2020 at 12:12 PM
Hello Peter I love roses they are my fav. flowers. When they wither and die it means time to replace them. I am also born a romantic. Enjoy your day my friend.
Deepa Avatar
November 1, 2020 at 12:12 PM
Another creative one that is relatable to our very own life too.People come and go into our lives.Heart always ready to accept anytime. Roses and vase can be compared to relationships too...Am I right dear Darlene mam?.. I loved your poem.Keep going.Take care.Much love:-)
De Beaulieu Avatar
November 1, 2020 at 3:51 PM
Hello Deepa, Yes Deepa, roses in a vase can be related to a relationship. I am not in a relationship. Perhaps one day. Much love Darlene.
Gentile Avatar
October 31, 2020 at 7:18 AM
You are penned the cycle of beauty, Darlene! It is never faded forever! Hope you have been well, Happy Saturday xxoo
De Beaulieu Avatar
October 31, 2020 at 10:01 AM
Hello Mike Gentile, thank you Mike. Yes the roses will never fade Thank you Mike. Happy Sarurday to you. Enjoy your weekend my friend. xxxx-oooo.
Wolf Avatar
October 29, 2020 at 5:09 PM
A rose is a rose is a rose, they say -- especially those gorgeous red ones. Have a nice evening, Darlene. :) Gershon
De Beaulieu Avatar
October 30, 2020 at 5:43 AM
Hello Gershon yes that is what they say. Red roses are beautiful. Enjoy your day my friend.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 29, 2020 at 11:51 AM
When love is alive, your vase is often filled with roses! Nice, Darlene!
De Beaulieu Avatar
October 29, 2020 at 2:52 PM
Hello Kim, yes when love is alive the vase is filled with roses. Hugs Darlene
Y. Avatar
October 27, 2020 at 3:28 PM
Hi Darlene, I love red roses. When I receive them from someone special, makes me love them more. Thanks for sharing this heartfelt write. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis
De Beaulieu Avatar
October 28, 2020 at 5:40 AM
Hello Alexis Y. I also like red roses. They are beautiful flowers. Thank you for the lovely comment. Enjoy your day my frend.
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October 27, 2020 at 4:37 AM
Hi Darlene, I wish you a garden full of bright roses all a different hue, with the best red on in the middle. Enjoy your day. ~~
De Beaulieu Avatar
October 27, 2020 at 5:27 AM
Hello Victor, thank you. It would be nice to have a garden full of rose with different colors . With the brighter glowing bright in the sunshine Enjoy your .Red roses glowing in the sunshine.
Romios Avatar
October 27, 2020 at 1:43 AM
I liked this one, Darlene...roses are so bice in a house Pangie xx
De Beaulieu Avatar
October 27, 2020 at 5:28 AM
Hello Panagiota, Yes the roses are beatiful in the house. Hugs Darlene xxxx-oooo.
Cunningham Avatar
October 26, 2020 at 11:55 AM
They bring so much pleasure to the eye Darlene along with the beautiful scent they give off. Tom
De Beaulieu Avatar
October 26, 2020 at 12:31 PM
Hello tom, yes roses do give pleasure and are beautiful flowers with the beautiful scent. Enjy your daymy friend.
One Avatar
October 26, 2020 at 11:54 AM
Roses are so beautiful... Lovely image... Have a nice day
De Beaulieu Avatar
October 26, 2020 at 12:32 PM
Hello Silent One, yes roses are beautiful. my fav. flowers. Thank you for the lovely comment. enjoy your day my friend.
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