Roses

I have been born a rose with inch-thick thorns.
I am:
Extremely dangerous
Highly potent 
A neon light explosion
A supernova of stardust 
Get too close, I will make you bleed.
Sweet, succulent drops into your mouth, over your teeth.
An iron dance on your tongue, a fire burning in your eyes.
Hands like shears you swoop down and uproot me
Take away my oxygen, my light, my life.
The sweet sugar that used to bubble up and drip down my stem like honey now clogs my pores and inflates my body.
Your greedy harvesting hands could not wait for me to grow, to bloom, to blossom.
I could’ve been warm, I could’ve been soft, I could’ve been everything by being nothing at all…
By being me.
I am not here anymore. 
A rose is a rose is a rose
You would rather no one have me at all,
Than to let me be my own.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Stanley Avatar
October 29, 2016 at 12:08 PM
Beautiful prose from a beautiful rose!
Leachet Avatar
October 27, 2016 at 10:41 PM
Very well composed!! I loved this work of yours. Keep on writing.
Green Avatar
October 27, 2016 at 3:04 PM
I loved the poem but will never be able to figure out that mind set. If someone cares about you, they should want you to be happy. And yes, it hurts to lose someone but, let them go and be them.
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October 25, 2016 at 5:26 PM
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October 25, 2016 at 2:33 PM
Very powerful Sophie!
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