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Roses

truth in true form
withstand storm
minds transform
has their corm
beauty-norm
less deform 
look lukewarm
duties perform 

stands every great celebrity 
spell-bound in their beauty 
their smell is like fruity
aren't they so cutie?
having them is booty 
midst environs sooty
though they look bit snooty
my pen bleeds as though her duty


04 September 2022 
Charlie New-Ku Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Charles Messina

Copyright © Christuraj Alex | Year Posted 2022

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Sara Kendrick Date: 10/22/2022 3:49:00 AM Creative winning work in Charles' contest. Way to go. Congratulations on this great winner. Sara Login to Reply

Linda Alice Fowler Date: 10/19/2022 1:59:00 PM Congratulations on your win Christuraj! Fabulous rhyming :) Login to Reply

Sotto Poet Date: 10/19/2022 6:31:00 AM Congratulations on your contest win, Alex. Undoubtedly well-deserved with this delightful write. Login to Reply Christuraj Alex Date: 10/19/2022 10:02:00 AM Thank you very much. May God Bless You!

Charles Messina Date: 10/18/2022 4:08:00 PM Awesome, Christuraj. A delightful read and written so well. Congratulations my friend on your win in my contest. All the best, Charlie Login to Reply Christuraj Alex Date: 10/19/2022 2:01:00 AM Thank you very much for giving me an opportunity.

Brian Sambourne Date: 9/5/2022 6:41:00 AM Such fine rhymes that lead to a concluding line that reflects on the poet's task - to write + bleed. The poetic link of pen + rose thorns is most original. Overall, the lines in your poem, Christuraj, are sharp, succinct + inviting. Best wishes as you write on, Brian Login to Reply Christuraj Alex Date: 9/6/2022 3:10:00 AM Thank you very much. May God Bless You!

Bill Baker Date: 9/4/2022 4:54:00 PM Nice way for new Kaikuity to concludity. Fun entry for the contest, Christuraj. Good luck my friend! Bill Login to Reply

Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 9/4/2022 10:58:00 AM Hello Christopher Alex, roses are beautiful in any color. Especially when in different colors. I love the roses my fav. flower. xx Login to Reply Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 9/7/2022 3:29:00 PM Hello Christopher Alex, Thank you , God bless you. /Darlene Christuraj Alex Date: 9/6/2022 3:10:00 AM Thank you very much. May God Bless You!