Christuraj Alex Poet Haiku

Roses

truth in true form
withstand storm
minds transform
has their corm
beauty-norm
less deform 
look lukewarm
duties perform 

stands every great celebrity 
spell-bound in their beauty 
their smell is like fruity
aren't they so cutie?
having them is booty 
midst environs sooty
though they look bit snooty
my pen bleeds as though her duty


04 September 2022 
Charlie New-Ku Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Charles Messina

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Sara Kendrick October 22, 2022 at 3:49 AM Creative winning work in Charles' contest. Way to go. Congratulations on this great winner. Sara

Linda Alice Fowler October 19, 2022 at 1:59 PM Congratulations on your win Christuraj! Fabulous rhyming :)

Sotto Poet October 19, 2022 at 6:31 AM Congratulations on your contest win, Alex. Undoubtedly well-deserved with this delightful write. Christuraj Alex October 19, 2022 at 10:02 AM Thank you very much. May God Bless You!

Charles Messina October 18, 2022 at 4:08 PM Awesome, Christuraj. A delightful read and written so well. Congratulations my friend on your win in my contest. All the best, Charlie Christuraj Alex October 19, 2022 at 2:01 AM Thank you very much for giving me an opportunity.

Brian Sambourne September 5, 2022 at 6:41 AM Such fine rhymes that lead to a concluding line that reflects on the poet's task - to write + bleed. The poetic link of pen + rose thorns is most original. Overall, the lines in your poem, Christuraj, are sharp, succinct + inviting. Best wishes as you write on, Brian Christuraj Alex September 6, 2022 at 3:10 AM Thank you very much. May God Bless You!

Bill Baker September 4, 2022 at 4:54 PM Nice way for new Kaikuity to concludity. Fun entry for the contest, Christuraj. Good luck my friend! Bill

Darlene De Beaulieu September 4, 2022 at 10:58 AM Hello Christopher Alex, roses are beautiful in any color. Especially when in different colors. I love the roses my fav. flower. xx Darlene De Beaulieu September 7, 2022 at 3:29 PM Hello Christopher Alex, Thank you , God bless you. /Darlene Christuraj Alex September 6, 2022 at 3:10 AM Thank you very much. May God Bless You!