Roses

truth in true form withstand storm minds transform has their corm beauty-norm less deform look lukewarm duties perform stands every great celebrity spell-bound in their beauty their smell is like fruity aren't they so cutie? having them is booty midst environs sooty though they look bit snooty my pen bleeds as though her duty 04 September 2022 Charlie New-Ku Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Charles Messina

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/22/2022 3:49:00 AM

Creative winning work in Charles' contest. Way to go. Congratulations on this great winner. Sara

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 10/19/2022 1:59:00 PM

Congratulations on your win Christuraj! Fabulous rhyming :)

Sotto Poet

Date: 10/19/2022 6:31:00 AM

Congratulations on your contest win, Alex. Undoubtedly well-deserved with this delightful write.

Christuraj Alex
Date: 10/19/2022 10:02:00 AM

Thank you very much. May God Bless You!

Charles Messina

Date: 10/18/2022 4:08:00 PM

Awesome, Christuraj. A delightful read and written so well. Congratulations my friend on your win in my contest. All the best, Charlie

Christuraj Alex
Date: 10/19/2022 2:01:00 AM

Thank you very much for giving me an opportunity.

Brian Sambourne

Date: 9/5/2022 6:41:00 AM

Such fine rhymes that lead to a concluding line that reflects on the poet's task - to write + bleed. The poetic link of pen + rose thorns is most original. Overall, the lines in your poem, Christuraj, are sharp, succinct + inviting. Best wishes as you write on, Brian

Christuraj Alex
Date: 9/6/2022 3:10:00 AM

Thank you very much. May God Bless You!

Bill Baker

Date: 9/4/2022 4:54:00 PM

Nice way for new Kaikuity to concludity. Fun entry for the contest, Christuraj. Good luck my friend! Bill

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 9/4/2022 10:58:00 AM

Hello Christopher Alex, roses are beautiful in any color. Especially when in different colors. I love the roses my fav. flower. xx

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/7/2022 3:29:00 PM

Hello Christopher Alex, Thank you , God bless you. /Darlene

Christuraj Alex
Date: 9/6/2022 3:10:00 AM

Thank you very much. May God Bless You!