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I wrote on my roses because I adore them but hate spiders. Seeing the spider web as I trimmed my bushes the other day made me think how spiders and other critters must be lurking in there!

haiku ~ roses among bright roses weaving a delicate web . . . the unseen spider Aug. 4, 2020 For Brian Strand's 'Hi-Ku(6) place promise' Poetry Contest

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Date: 3/22/2021 9:13:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Andrea ~
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Date: 2/2/2021 1:40:00 AM
Andrea, One of the most beautiful Haikus ever. Thanks for your review of my “Moonlight Ghost Resemblance” poem as it is a deeply personal work for me. The question marks were unintended blunders which you kindly brought to my attention. Howard
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Date: 1/11/2021 1:29:00 PM
Dropping by again to say many congrats on your win Andrea;-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/13/2020 7:42:00 AM
Beauty reigns when good poetry is made salute, alkas
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Date: 8/10/2020 7:23:00 AM
Back with congratulations! xomo
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Date: 8/9/2020 12:09:00 PM
Back to congratulate your big win. Run for the Roses!
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Date: 8/9/2020 4:13:00 AM
oh, this is truly beautiful
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Date: 8/8/2020 4:51:00 PM
Beautiful Imagery!
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Date: 8/8/2020 1:01:00 PM
Love the image Andrea, many congratulations on your win :-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/8/2020 12:32:00 PM
Must be getting to be fall...wonderful and simple. Congrats on the 2nd place.
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Date: 8/8/2020 6:27:00 AM
Spider weaving a web among bright roses gives me a sense of mysterious company. Brilliant one Andrea. Congratulations on your win! :)
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Date: 8/7/2020 12:30:00 PM
I so relate to your roses, Andrea! We have a rose garden with 20+ bushes. Bought a new one this year called Ketchup and Mustard. It sits near Hot Cocoa! I put up with the spiders as they eat mosquitoes! Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 8/7/2020 10:20:00 AM
I like your roses and the lurking spider, Andrea! Don't be too hard on them spiders; they rid your plants of other insects! ~ Congratulations on your deserved podium finish. ~ Warm regards // paul
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Date: 8/7/2020 9:26:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. "Wonderful" I love pink roses. Any in your garden???? I will take the roses and you can keep the spiders. Enjoy your win and day.........
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Date: 8/7/2020 9:05:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Andrea. Well done!
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Date: 8/7/2020 7:21:00 AM
C'mon Andrea...the poor little guy just got flushed out of the water spout. Great job and great placement, congrats
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Date: 8/7/2020 6:03:00 AM
Congratulations, Andrea. It's a great haiku with beautiful images. Love roses!
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Date: 8/7/2020 4:12:00 AM
Andrea, congratulations on your winning placement, a great summer scene with great imagery, hate to see spiders too!
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Date: 8/6/2020 11:16:00 PM
From any other view, the trap will do.
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Date: 8/5/2020 9:18:00 PM
Very prettily penned, Andrea.
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Date: 8/5/2020 2:39:00 PM
Spiders do seem to be everywhere. Maybe the ones on your roses will trap more dangerous insects in their webs. Very creative! Best wishes in the contest. Hugs, Carolyn
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Date: 8/5/2020 1:47:00 PM
Well scribed, but spiders eat aphids! Aloha! Rico
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Date: 8/5/2020 12:24:00 PM
Like roses they too are part of nature but dont they make your skin crawl lol. Tom
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Date: 8/5/2020 7:48:00 AM
Andrea, I love to find your Haiku 'roses', enjoyed with my Wednesday coffee. And those lurking spiders that live among us. I leave my Daddy longlegs alone. They hunt bad spiders. -Richard
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Date: 8/5/2020 6:17:00 AM
Lovely poem, Andrea.
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