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I wrote on my roses because I adore them but hate spiders. Seeing the spider web as I trimmed my bushes the other day made me think how spiders and other critters must be lurking in there!

haiku ~ roses


among bright roses

weaving a delicate web . . .

the unseen spider

 
Aug. 4, 2020 

For Brian Strand's 'Hi-Ku(6) place promise' Poetry Contest

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Line Gauthier

Date: 3/22/2021 9:13:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Andrea ~

Howard Kerr

Date: 2/2/2021 1:40:00 AM

Andrea, One of the most beautiful Haikus ever. Thanks for your review of my “Moonlight Ghost Resemblance” poem as it is a deeply personal work for me. The question marks were unintended blunders which you kindly brought to my attention. Howard

Jan Allison

Date: 1/11/2021 1:29:00 PM

Dropping by again to say many congrats on your win Andrea;-) hugs Jan xx

Alkas Poetry

Date: 8/13/2020 7:42:00 AM

Beauty reigns when good poetry is made salute, alkas

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

Date: 8/10/2020 7:23:00 AM

Back with congratulations! xomo

John Watt

Date: 8/9/2020 12:09:00 PM

Back to congratulate your big win. Run for the Roses!

Jack Horne

Date: 8/9/2020 4:13:00 AM

oh, this is truly beautiful

Paghunda Zahid

Date: 8/8/2020 4:51:00 PM

Beautiful Imagery!

Jan Allison

Date: 8/8/2020 1:01:00 PM

Love the image Andrea, many congratulations on your win :-) hugs Jan xx

Jeanne Mcgee

Date: 8/8/2020 12:32:00 PM

Must be getting to be fall...wonderful and simple. Congrats on the 2nd place.

Aditi Mishra

Date: 8/8/2020 6:27:00 AM

Spider weaving a web among bright roses gives me a sense of mysterious company. Brilliant one Andrea. Congratulations on your win! :)

Sam Kauffman

Date: 8/7/2020 12:30:00 PM

I so relate to your roses, Andrea! We have a rose garden with 20+ bushes. Bought a new one this year called Ketchup and Mustard. It sits near Hot Cocoa! I put up with the spiders as they eat mosquitoes! Congratulations on your win!

Paul Callus

Date: 8/7/2020 10:20:00 AM

I like your roses and the lurking spider, Andrea! Don't be too hard on them spiders; they rid your plants of other insects! ~ Congratulations on your deserved podium finish. ~ Warm regards // paul

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/7/2020 9:26:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. "Wonderful" I love pink roses. Any in your garden???? I will take the roses and you can keep the spiders. Enjoy your win and day.........

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/7/2020 9:05:00 AM

Congrats on your win, Andrea. Well done!

John Lawless

Date: 8/7/2020 7:21:00 AM

C'mon Andrea...the poor little guy just got flushed out of the water spout. Great job and great placement, congrats

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 8/7/2020 6:03:00 AM

Congratulations, Andrea. It's a great haiku with beautiful images. Love roses!

Tania Kitchin

Date: 8/7/2020 4:12:00 AM

Andrea, congratulations on your winning placement, a great summer scene with great imagery, hate to see spiders too!

Robert Warlov

Date: 8/6/2020 11:16:00 PM

From any other view, the trap will do.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 8/5/2020 9:18:00 PM

Very prettily penned, Andrea.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/5/2020 2:39:00 PM

Spiders do seem to be everywhere. Maybe the ones on your roses will trap more dangerous insects in their webs. Very creative! Best wishes in the contest. Hugs, Carolyn

Rico Leffanta

Date: 8/5/2020 1:47:00 PM

Well scribed, but spiders eat aphids! Aloha! Rico

Tom Cunningham

Date: 8/5/2020 12:24:00 PM

Like roses they too are part of nature but dont they make your skin crawl lol. Tom

Quoth Theraven

Date: 8/5/2020 7:48:00 AM

Andrea, I love to find your Haiku 'roses', enjoyed with my Wednesday coffee. And those lurking spiders that live among us. I leave my Daddy longlegs alone. They hunt bad spiders. -Richard

Vijay Pandit

Date: 8/5/2020 6:17:00 AM

Lovely poem, Andrea.

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